The Story Before Time Writing Challenge: The Adventures of Cherry P.I. by Emma Lazar

Emma Lazar is a thirteen-year old writer who participated and completed the summer 2026 Story Before Time Writing Challenge. Her short story, The Adventures of Cherry P.I., is a hilarious collection of mysterious cases in a dinosaur and dessert-filled community.

Read Emma’s story below:

Introduction

Hi, I’m Cherry. I work in Triassic Town as a Prehistoric Investigator. You will find, in this book, five of my most odd and exciting adventures. Many things will happen and you will meet many more people, but they aren’t all human. If you can not handle thieving snacks, dinosaur architects, salon owners, chefs, pilots, and other mysterious, and delicious characters, then close this book and return it to the shelf.
Love Cherry, P.I.

Chapter 1: The Egg-ceptional Heist

It was a Friday when Pterry D. Actyl swooped into my office. “My wife’s eggs!” he exclaimed, “they have been stolen!” This happens all the time, so I wasn’t too surprised. “How many?” I asked. “148” he answered calmly. This took me by surprise. About five minutes later, I heard a thump. A. Patty Saurus was stuck in the doorway! “Help!” she said, “my eggs have been stolen!” More? I was intrigued. “How many?” I asked, having deja vu. “302” she answered, finally getting unstuck. I leave my cozy cave-office and get just past the “Cave Sweet Cave” mat when I am stopped by Great-Grandma Maya Saura. “All 3 generations of my eggs have been stolen!” she says. I try to keep count and ask, “how many?” She says, “2,222.” My brain can barely do math that big. With 2,S72 eggs on the line, I set off to my accomplice Bear Claw’s house.

Bear Claw lives in a neighborhood called TreeTopolis, with all the flying creatures. Bear meets me at the bottom of his ladder. “I need your help,” I say and explain the situation. “Mike R. O’Rapter just moved in a couple treehouses away,” he suggests, “maybe we should interview him?” “Great idea, Bear,” I reply, “let’s rock and roll!” We run over to Mike’s house and slam open the door. I see some eggs shells and go over to examine them. “What have you done with the eggs!” Bear demands. “I haven’t done nothin’ with no eggs!” Mike said, “but how many?” “2,S72,” I answered. His eyes light up with hunger. “Tell me if you find them,” he says, licking his lips, “I might drop by.” “Suuuure,” I answered and jumped off the balcony.

We take the scenic trail to our next suspect, listening to the non-stolen Actyl kids squawking. After a while, Bear asks me where we are going and why I told Mike about the eggs. “To see Tru O’Don, my nutty friend. And they were the wrong egg shells,” I answer, “Omnivors eat EVERYTHING.” We sneak into Cretaceous College. “Wow,” Bear marvels, “I didn’t go to college, but I wish I had.” With its high, volcanic ceiling and lava heaters, who wouldn’t love CC. “The race before us was a race of giant horseshoe crabs called…” is all I heard of Ms. O’Don’s history lecture before I pulled her aside. “Tru, I need to ask you a few questions,” I ask, “where were you last night?” She blushes and answers, “I was on a date with Dean Onykus. We got chicken salads at Ann Kylosaurus’ Gourmet Salads.” “Are you sure you didn’t get EGG salad?” I retorted. “No!” She said, “I’m allergic!”

I sulked back home, having yet another dead end. On the way, I passed the news studio where Titan O. Boa is broadcasting live. “The mysssstery of the sssstolen eggssss remainssss unssssloved,” he says, “the four victimssss are not happy. Alberta Ssssaurussss, the Actyl family, A. Patty Ssssaurussss, and Maya Ssssaura. When will our beloved Cherry

P.I. figure it out? Thissss issss Titan O. Boa, ssssigning off.” Then I figured it out! I ran as fast as I could to the Saurus Salon and I burst in just as Therazina Saurus was getting her nails done. “Cherry!” Alberta says, “you scared me! I could have been impaled!” She was referring to Therazina’s 5 foot long nails. “Sorry,” I say, “but Titan O. Boa is going to steal your eggs!” There was a collective gasp. “Albert!” Alberta says, “he is alone at home protecting our eggs!” We hear a mighty battle filled with roars and hisses. I run out of the salon, then over the river and through the woods to Alberta’s house I go. I push back ferns, horns, and saber-tooth monkey hands, then I hear a whoosh. “Need a lift?” Pterry is there! I hop on his back and we take to the skies. I see Titan slithering through the town with a sack of eggs on his back. I instruct Pterry to get low over the snake. I jump off and wave him away. I use my trench coat to make a sack full of animal pelts, then switch out the to sacks. I throw the full egg sack to Albert. Perfect timing, too, because we have reached the Cave of Eggs. We are not alone, there are 49 police men, one for every foot of the thief. “What! Thissss issss all a huge missssundersssstanding! I’m innocent!” Titan pleaded “Tell it to the judge!” Police officer Pat A. Choux said, “innocent is spelled with a ‘c’.” I counted the eggs and wonder why he stole ALL of those eggs. “Officer, I would like to interview the thief,” I said. He left for a little while and Titan and I talked.

Me: “Why did you steal so many eggs?” Titan: “ I wanted some kids.”

Me: “But why so many?”

Titan: “Being a dad can make one hungry.” Me: “Officer take him away.”

Pat: “My pleasure.”

Titan is still pleading innocence while getting dragged in front of judge E. Claire. As I walk past Cretaceous College and TreeTopolis, I think about Alberta Saurus’ home. I meet up with Edmon Tosaurus, the town’s architect and construction supervisor. We talk a little while and he agrees to build the Saurus’ new house free of charge and I leave for home. When I get back to the office, I see something peculiar on my desk. I call up Bear Claw, “Bear, we have a new case.”

Chapter 2: The Missing Assistant (and Pat)

“Terribly sorry, love,” responds Bear Claw’s assistant Julie Roll, “but Mr. Claw is not home.” “What?!” I said, “I was with him 10 minutes ago!”

“My apologies. Miss. He left very suddenly.” I hung up and ran to the police office to get some help and saw Pat A. Choux was gone, too! Intrigued, I explored Pat’s pristine office. I see he left his sunscreen, which is not good in a heat wave, as well as noting his snow clothes are missing. I then go to Bear’s house in TreeTopolis, but before I can get inside I am stopped by Pterry D. Actyl.

“Ms. Tart,” he said, “Q. Coatlus is gone!” I looked around and saw overflowing trash everywhere! Where could our amazing trashwoman have gone? I said goodbye to Pterry and went to explore Bear’s house.

Bear’s house was a mess, to say the least. There were mountains of laundry, piles of paper, and a lake of soda. One thing stood out, a receipt floating on the lake for 5 boxes of hot chocolate at the General Store. None of the clues worked…who wore snowboots in the middle of a heat wave?! In one last attempt for clues that made sense, I went over to the dump.

It. Was. Beautiful. There were old glass bottles made into suncatchers, knitted blankets, rainbow yarn, and a template for giant wing warmers that was printed yesterday. One other thing caught my eye, a poster for Ice Age Island. I went there for vacation last week and it was freezing. On Q’s calendar I saw two dates marked in red, August 1st and 8th. They said

Drop-off Choux and Pick-up Choux. I knew where Pat and Bear were now, but where Q was remained a mystery. Luckily, I live for mystery. I can’t do this on my own though. I ask Pterry for a lift to Ice Age Island. “Anything for you, Ms. Tart, you found my wife’s eggs!” So I climb on his back and we take to the skies.

When I got to Ice Age Island, I went straight to the Prehistoric Investigator’s office. I walked in and was met with a huge hug.

“CHERRY TART,” yelled Blueberry P.I., my little sister. “Blueberry!” I embrace her in a giant hug. “It’s been too long.”

We talk a little: she tells me about her mysteries, I tell her about the eggs. She tells me about some baby mammothes, I tell her about Q. “Wait,” she says after I say why I’m here, “tell me all the clues.” So I tell her about the wing warmers, calendar, and missing knitting needles. “Well, tomorrow is the 8th, maybe she will come back?” Blueberry suggests.

“Good idea, I’m going to go search just in case, though,” I say. But suddenly I am attacked! RAWR!!!!! Two ferocious, but adorable, baby saber-tooth tigers jump on me.

“Tootie! Fruitie! Off!” yells Blueberry, then she takes Tootie while Fruitie stays firmly planted on my head. “Sorry” *pant* “Ms. Tart” *pant* “we just” *pant* “came back” *pant* “from the mammoth” *pant* “mystery.” Blueberry’s assistant, Tira Misu, says before taking a nap in her chair. I say goodbye to Blueberry P.I. and actually leave.

On my way to the hotel, I passed a very angry lady saying something like “Patrick Anderson Choux! When I get my hands… Never again… You’ll regret it!” She stomps past me to the police office and I follow. I used my keen intellect to deduce that Patrick Anderson Choux is Pat A. Choux. Sure enough, Pat and Bear Claw come out holding mugs of hot cocoa! Bear looks my way before whispering something in Pat’s ear, grabbing the rest of the hot cocoa, and heading my way. Pat and Patty are in a very heated conversation when Bear gets over to me.

“Thanks for picking me up,” he said, “Q never came.”

“Well I didn’t even know you were here!” I said, “you didn’t tell me where you were! Or Julie either!”

“Sorry about that,” he responded, “Pat wanted to take a boys trip so he couldn’t take Patty and he invited me instead. We left very suddenly.”

“Oh,” I say, “okay well we need to find Q. I know she is here…” “I don’t see her,” Bear interjects.

“No, not here with us, here on this island.”

“Ohhhhhhh. Let’s rock and roll!” he says as he runs off. “Hey! That’s my line!” I exclaimed as I ran after him.

We explored the resort: the pool, the spa, the hotel, and the cruises. There was no sign of Q anywhere. Just when I was about to head back over to Triassic Town, I found a trail of rainbow yarn and a pair of large knitting needles. I brought out my trusty magmafying glass and followed the thin trail up mountains, down mountains, in lakes, out of lakes, and to… the dump!

We ran in and found Q talking to Sabe R. Tooth-Tiger. “We are fresh out of knitting needles, but we have some chopsticks, sticks, and baseball bats.” Sabe pitched to Q.

“Thanks, I think the chopsticks would work the best.”

“Or you can use these” I say, holding up Q’s knitting needles.

“Oh! Thank you sooo much, my wings were sooo cold!” Q exclaimed and took her knitting needles. “What are you doing here Cherry?” Q asked as we went to pick up the Chouxs.

“I’m here looking for you!” I exclaimed, “the streets of Triassic Town are covered in trash.” “Sorry,” she replied, “it felt so nice here and I just stayed on the roof of the hotel.”

When we picked up Pat and Patty, they were chatting like nothing ever happened. On the way back, Bear told me an odd story. One I had to write down. Beware, in this next chapter, Bear tells me a lot of tall tales. If this story does not make sense, it is not my fault. If you like mammoths and assistants, you’ll enjoy this.

Chapter 3: The Assistants’ Adventure

Hi, my name is Bear Claw. I have been D.P.I. (Deputy Prehistoric Investigator) of Triassic Town for about 2 years. This is what happened when I tried to take my first vacation.

I flew Q Coatlus and Pat A. Choux to Ice Age Island. (You flew?!) Well, I didn’t actually fly. I was on Q’s back…but I was basically flying. Anyway, we landed in front of the police office because Pat wanted to feel at home on vacation. Then, the most beautiful detective I’d ever seen burst in…Tira Misu.

“Pete! Cal! Are you here?!” she yelled as her pet tigers, Fruitie and Tootie explored.

“I don’t know a Pete but I do know a Pat,” I said. “I’m Bear Claw, D.P.I. to Cherry Tart, 2 years running. This Pat A. Choux, he’s a really old police officer.”

“Fine, let’s see what you can do,” she said.

She explained the mystery as I showed off HUGE muscles (what muscles?). She said this week is the 7,034th Ice Cream Festival. Wool E. Mammoth planned an amazing first day: a party, a milkshake pool, and a giant ice cream cake from Cari Bou’s Creamery. But when everyone was swimming in the pool, the deed was done. The Ice Cream Cake disappeared! There were 2 sets of tracks around the table on which the cake previously stood. Large circles, small circles, paws, and hooves.

“I know the circles are mammoth prints. We should start there,” she said.

“Let’s rock and roll!, ” I responded (Hey! That’s my line!). Tira then pointed me in the right direction and we all ran towards the mammoth’s home.

When we got there, Wool was crying Wooly was making dinner, and the kids were running around chasing Tootie and Fruitie. We talked to Wool to see what his story was, but he was crying. When we asked him what was wrong, he said”Everyone was blaming me” *cries* because I kept commenting on how good the cake looked!.” Then he continued to cry so we interrogated Wooly.

“Where were you the night of the murder!” I demanded.

“What murder?!” she said. “Ohhhh, the disappearance of the cake? I was watching the kids get all sticky in the pool.”

“Thank you,” Tira Misu said then walked out the door and walked towards Cari Bou’s Creamery.

The sign on the door said “Closed for Quality Test.” Even though the sign clearly stated the store was closed, Tira pushed through the doors…and straight into Cari licking frosting off an ice cream cake. A chocolate ice cream cake. Ah Ha!” I exclaimed while Tootie and Fruitie joined Cari in licking the cake.

“You, Mrs. Cari Bou, are going to jail for the theft of the Ice Cream Festival Cake!” I reached for my handcuffs (Hoove-cuffs?) before Tira took them and started questioning her.

“What were you doing at 3:00 PM yesterday?”

“I was swimming in the milkshake pool, of course.”

“What proof do you have?”

Then Cari pulled a picture of her in the pool dated July 31, 7,034th Annual Ice Cream Festival. “What number festival is this?” asked Pat. Tira responded by leaving the creamery and heading towards the police office.

“Let’s regroup,” she said. “We know all the mammoths and Cari are clear…”

“So that just leaves anyone with paws,” Pat finished. “But you will have to solve it, I have to call Patty, she is going to be really mad.” he said, then walked solemnly into the office.

“Follow me,” Tira said as she ran out of the office and to The Pawed Pub. While there, we talked to Sabe R. Tooth, Short-Faced Bear, and Cave’ Lion, all which had genuine alibis. Then Di R. Wolf came up to us and told her story.

“I was walking around the party, making bets on who would make the biggest splash in the pool…(kids, never bet). I was walking around the cake table when I saw Cari Bou licking the frosting!”

This was very surprising, but it could just be Di blaming someone else. “What were you doing during the pool party?” I asked.

“I was making sure I got my money, by the way. I got a 20 on Cari Bou taking the cake, anyone else?”

“No, thank you” Tira said, then dragged me out before I could put 40 on Di. We left the pub and went to the pool.

We investigated the crime scene for a little while before Tira noticed Tootie and Fruitie licking a trail of chocolate ice cream leading out of the building! We found a lead! We followed the trail everywhere. It went in and around mountains, lakes, and forests, before it finally ended at a small hole in a mountain. “Now what?” I asked, “We can’t fit in there.” Then Tira pulled me tot the side and we saw a little squirrel-like creature run out. It was Crono Pio! He was leading his kids somewhere! Maybe he took the cake! Tira and I snuck right behind them. They retraced the trail all the way back to the pool. They went under the table and didn’t come back out. We heard faint singing as Tira threw the table cloth off of the table. It was the cake!

Chrono cut a hole in the table, then put the table cloth back on during the pool party. Chrono explained everything, “My centuplets had their birthday today and it is hard to find work while being so tiny.” he said. “I thought it would be fine.”

“You’re okay, just buy a new cake,” I said. Then we helped him find work as a mixer at the Creamery. It isn’t the easiest job but it pays well.

Chrono apologized to everyone, then we all ate the new cake. Tira finally introduced us to Pete Za and Cal Zone, the police chiefs here. I got to enjoy my vacation until Cherry came (hey!) See you next time!

Chapter 4: The Ring Thief

I’m back everyone! Many thanks to my assistant Bear Claw for writing the last story, but I’ve got this one. It started the week after Bear’s vacation, when he, Pat, Patty, Pete Za, and Cal Zone decided to try a different vacation.

I was visiting the Cretaceous College, and after attending one of Tru O’Don’s history lectures, I was approached by Dean O’nycus.

“Cherry P.I., I need your help,” he said, “I am going to propose to Tru O’don today!” “What do you need help with?” I excitedly responded..

“I want to make sure everything goes perfectly, be here at 3!” he said, then ran away frantically.

I was bored so I headed toward my office. On the way there, I passed a woman taking pictures of plants. I realized this was my sister, Cocoa Tart, P.I.! “COCOA TART!” I yelled and wrapped her in a bear hug (Bear was not involved).

“Hello sister,” she responded with a faraway look in her eyes. “I thought I would drop in to collect some new things. I have a bit of everything from Cavemen Cove.”

I escorted her to my office to talk more. “What have you been doing?” I asked. “Not much, but something weird is going to happen in the waters around the cove.” “…going to?…wait, I’m confused. Why aren’t you there right now?”

“It hasn’t happened yet, I need to bring you with me when I leave.”

This confused me even more, but I couldn’t think too hard on it because at that moment Dean burst in. “CHERRY! CHERRY! MY ENGAGEMENT RING IS GONE!” He said before curling up in a ball and crying.

“I am going to look for feathers,” Cocoa said and left the cave. “Dean?! Dean?! Are you OK?!” I asked.

“NO! I was just making reservations at Ann Kylosaurus’ Gourmet Salads for a candle-lit dinner of chicken salad and Ann asked to see the ring. But when I reached in my pocket, the ring was GONE! The only thing there was a slightly crushed gray feather.” He gave me the feather then ran out crying.

With only one clue and a 3:00 deadline, I started by going around to all the gray feathered dinosaurs. I couldn’t interview Tru O’don because it would spoil the surprise (if there was going to be a surprise at all). So I interviewed Mikala Rapter, Mike’s gray feathered girlfriend..

“Mikala, have you seen a ring?”

“Ohhh, no, have you?” She said with a hungry gleam in her eyes.

“No, I was just wondering.” I said, then quickly left and went next door to Mike R. O’rapter’s treehouse. But before I knocked on the door, I looked in the window and saw Mike’s feathers were blue. So I left and went to find Archy Opteryx.

I found Archy at practice with the Feathered Friends (very convenient) his band. I interviewed him as well as Di Long, Yuti Rannus, and Hesper Onis. Even though they all had some gray feathers they were all in the clear. I was at a dead end, walking through the forest when I bumped into Cocoa.

“Why, hello Cherry. Look at this long bright red feather, doesn’t it belong to a rooster?” “What’s a rooster? Those don’t exist.”

“Not yet…” she said as she took a picture with her camera and walked off.

Now I was confused and at a dead end until I saw Draco Rex admiring something small and shiny… I ran towards him and snatched the ring out of his hands. When I looked closer, it was inscribed with PCS, the initials of Draco’s sister Pachy Cepholo-Saurus. “Why do you have your sister’s ring?” I asked. “For the last time we are COUSINS thrice removed! We are barely even related!” he yelled then stomped off. I walked around, interviewed a few more people, then sat clueless on a rock. A little while later Cocoa came over while staring at the road through her camera.

“Would you like to see a magic trick?” she asked. “Will it help?” I answered.

“Maybe.…” She brought out a bright blue feather, like one of Mike’s, and crushed it. Amazingly, it turned gray. The same grey as the feather Dean gave me!

I ran as fast as possible to TreeTopolis and I burst right into Mike’s house. I was too late though, he had already left! I jumped over the gap and to Mikala’s house. I ran in and this time, I was right! Mike was down on one knee and was proposing to Mikala.

“STOP!” I exclaimed and I yanked the ring from Mike.

“Hey! What was that?!” Mike yelled. Mikala stood and gave me a dirty look. “This is not yours!” I scolded.

“Yeah, it’s mine!” Mikala chimed in.

“No, it’s Dean O’nykus’” I said, “he is going to propose to Tru O’don.”

“Fine, you got me, I took it,” Mike confessed, “I just moved here and was going to pay it back when I got enough money.” Mikala scoffed and left.

“You need to go to Dean, apologize, then sign up as a janitor at the school to repay Dean.” I said. “Just pay for it yourself or take out a loan.” I left to go to Ann Kylosaurus’ Gourmet Salads and give Dean the good news when I ran into Cocoa walking around aimlessly.

“Hello, Cherry, may I accompany you to the salad restaurant?”

“How did you know where I was going? Actually, don’t answer that. You helped solve the mystery, come on.” I said as I led her to get chicken salad.

Dean O’nykus and Tru O’don are now going to be happily wed at Caveman Cove. Turns out I have to go home with Cocoa P.I. Who would have thought?

*The properties of Mike R. O’Rapter’s feathers are inspired by the modern-day Blue Jay. Blue Jays’ bright blue feathers are still blue when they fall off,

but when crushed (like sat on) turn gray.

-Cherry P.I.

Chapter 5: The Wrecked Wedding

Hello, My name is Pete Za. This is the story about how I became a Prehistoric Investigator.

I was vacationing at Caveman Cove with my friends Cal Zone, Bear Claw, Pat A. Choux, and Pat’s wife Patty. We all received an invitation to the wedding of my old colleague Dean Onykus. Bear and the Chouxs had brought nice clothes (as nice as Bear gets), but me and Cal brought nothing. The next day, on the wedding day, Cal and I rushed to Drthal’s Dressings. “What can I do ya for?” said Neo Drthal, the owner. “Two pelts fit for a wedding, please,” said Cal, “and fast.”

About 3 hours later, an hour after the wedding started, we left Drthal’s and ran towards the cove. When we got there, the reception was trashed and everyone was gone! I looked towards the ocean and I saw Tira Misu and Blueberry Tart P.I. floating there.

“Tira! Blueberry!” Cal and I yelled at the same time, but then a huge shark came up and swallowed them. “NOOO!” Yelled Cal as he dropped to his knees.

“Wait!” I exclaimed as I remembered something from the historical tour I took. “The SubMarine 54NDW1TCH! We can use it to go to the old SubWay station underwater!” I pulled Cal to the Cove Cave Museum, where they display the Sub 54NDW1TCH. I jumped in and tried to figure out the controls.

“I got this,” said Cal, “I majored in unique vehicle driving.”

We dove down, down, down, and to the SubWay station. The Sub station was in perfect condition aside from the family of ammonites living in it. “Hi,” I said to the biggest, “I’m Pete Za and this is Cal Zone, what do you know about the shady figures down here?” Ammy Nite, that was the mom’s name, said that the two most toothy, deadly, and biggest are Mo Sasaurus and Meg Ladon. Mo is long and strong, with A LOT of teeth. Meg is shorter, but she has 2 extra rows of teeth and can smell blood. “Thank you, Mrs. Nite.” I said then pulled Cal aside.

“I think Meg Ladon was the one that ate Tira and Blueberry.” “What if Meg was trying to save them?” he asked.

“Why would she save them?”

“The benches were burned, maybe they escaped into the ocean?” “No, come on, let’s go find Meg!”

“Fine.” said Cal as he reluctantly piloted the Sub 54NDW1TCH down to Meg Ladon’s lair. We found her home near a warm volcanic vent. Not a bad place. When we went into Meg’s cave it was extremely clean,

aside from the teeth leaking out from under her pillow and the coins mixed in with them. But there was no sign of Meg. We then went across the street to Arch Elon’s Apartments.

“Hello, good sirs, what may I do for you on this fine day.” Arch said as we swam in with our 6-inch Subs propelling us.

“We would like to see Mr. Mo Sasaurus, please,” said Cal.

“He is being questioned for mass murder.” I added, with the thought that it would make us sound important.

“Mr. Sasaurus is not in right now, thankfully, if he just committed mass murder.” Arch said, he then ushered us out to make sure we did not cause any more panic.

Back in the Sub 54NDW1TCH and headed towards the surface, we saw Wool E Mammoth flailing for help. We raced to the surface, but we were too late! Mo snatched Wool up and swam away. We chased him around underwater volcanos, through kelp forests and to…another Sub Station! In perfect condition, too! Mo opened his mouth and Wool swam out! I was very confused, but Mo started talking so we listened in from the shadows.

“Everyone, I know you all are wondering why you are here, why we put you in our mouths, and what happened so here is the basis of it all. You were having your wedding, up on the surface and a huge asteroid came out of nowhere and hit the middle of the aisle, sending everyone flying into the ocean! Meg and I get a pretty bad rep because we are very intimidating, but we are vegetarians. Since we don’t have hands, we held you in our mouths on the way down. As for why we’re here in this station. We would die trying to get you back on the surface, so we brought you here, the next best thing.” Cal hit me in a gesture of “I was right” before parking the Sub and dragging me into the middle of the room.

“Pete! Cal! You’re alive!” yelled Tira Misu, “when you were not found we thought you had died!”

“No biggie, is everyone accounted for?” I asked, then I heard a scream. It was Trudith O’Don, Tru’s mother. “My daughter! She’s gone!”

“As is my son!” replied Don Onykus, Dean’s father. We searched the Sub Station, but we could not find anything except a fleet of Sub 54NDW1TCHs. We dispatched teams of dinosaurs, people, and other mammals to search for the new bride and groom. Cal and I stayed behind to look for clues and when we were just about to give up hope and search on the 6-inch 54NDW1TCHs, we saw two of the 6-inch Subs were missing, perfect for a complete His and Hers set. I looked out the launch doors and could still see a trail of bubbles leftover. We raced after the bubbles, telling every team we found to follow us. The trail ended at a large forest of glowing coral. We saw the two missing 6-inches parked a little to the right so we dove into the coral and found…a new wedding venue being set up by the missing bride and groom. Everyone was relieved and the ceremony started. Once the wedding was over, I was promoted to

P.I. with Cal as my assistant. Until next time, Pete Za P.I., (and Cal Zone) out.

The End

What’s Ashley Reading?: The Case of the Missing Marquess

The Case of the Missing Marquess by Nancy Springer

First line: The only light struggles from the few gas street-lamps that remain unbroken, and from pots of fire suspended above the cobblestones, tended by old men selling boiled sea snails outside the public houses.

Summary: Enola Holmes, the younger sister of famed detective Sherlock Holmes, has lived her life on the family estate with only her mother as a companion. However, on her 14th birthday her mother mysteriously disappears leaving Enola to wonder what has happened to her. Using the clues left by her mother, she eludes her brother’s plans and escapes to London in search of her.

Along the way, she becomes embroiled in the case of the missing marquess and the dastardly villains who have abducted him. As she tries to rescue the young noble, she must also evade her older brother while also continuing her search for her mother. All in a day’s work it seems for a youngest Holmes sibling.

My Thoughts: A month or two ago I watched the Enola Holmes movies on Netflix. I enjoyed the star-studded cast including Millie Bobby Brown, Henry Cavill and Helena Bonham-Carter. Then recently I was looking for something short and lighter to listen to when I stumbled upon this. It felt like a perfect fit for my interest level at the time.

Having watched and read many Sherlock Holmes iterations, so I knew the feel of the Holmes-esque character. I liked both versions, movie and book, of Enola Holmes. She is smart, determined and resourceful as she tries to solve the mysteries before her. I loved how it introduces younger readers to clues and symbols in the art of detecting. For instance, Enola and her mother use the language of flowers to communicate in code. I can see this easily being a gateway into the more involved stories of Sherlock Holmes and other detective fiction.

Overall, it was an enjoyable listen. I may one day listen to more books in the series and see how they compare to the other movies. I would recommend this for teens looking for an engaging mystery series without too much violence or bad language.

What’s Ashley Reading?: A Box Full of Darkness

A Box Full of Darkness by Simone St. James

First line: When I wake in the middle of the night, I don’t always see darkness.

Summary: Fell, New York is known for its strange occurrences. For the Esmie family the disappearance of the youngest child, Ben, it is what finally drives them out of town and to lose contact with each other. Each of the older siblings have been haunted by mysterious visions and a fear of returning to their family home. That is until one day their brother Ben appears at the house, still a child, and summons them home. Why is he all of a sudden back and where has he been all these years? Fighting their fears they return to see if they can finally figure out what happened during that fated game of hide and seek many years before.

My Thoughts: Simone St. James is a master of her craft. Her books are a perfect mix of mystery and horror. It is always enough to give you the creeps but still keeping you invested in the plot. With this book I loved her inclusion of Easter eggs from her previous books. Tying them all together was genius and so much fun for her devoted readers.

There was so much to love about this book. It was truly spooky. The abandoned family home that is basically been left as a tomb for their missing sibling. Each of the siblings had some sort of paranormal encounters from seeing ghosts, visions of drowning and bright lights that no one else can see. Then there is a ghost child leaving wet footprints on the floor. A town with a dark past that no one can explain. What more could you ask for?

I really, really enjoyed this book but I still had a few things that bothered me. The strong attachment to Ben seemed so strange to me. Maybe I just don’t understand it. My sister is close in age to myself and I never had to take care or raise her which could be the reason behind the sibling’s feelings. And then the ending seemed to be rather quick. I guess I just wasn’t ready for it to end. I will still recommend this to any and all readers who like a good ghost story but these things were what seemed odd to me during my reading of it.

FYI: Missing children, ghosts, death

What’s Ashley Reading?: Santa Cruise

Santa Cruise by Mary Higgins Clark & Carol Higgins Clark

First line: Randolph Weed, self-styled commodore, stood on the deck of his pride and joy, the Royal Mermaid, an old ship he had bought and paid a fortune to refurbish and on which he intended to spend the rest of his life playing host to both friends and paying guests.

Summary: The maiden voyage of the Royal Mermaid is turning out to be more eventful than the Commodore had hoped for. The Santa Cruise was set to launch with people of all sorts who had done good in their communities and donated to worthy causes. Among these are Alvirah, a lottery winner turned amateur sleuth, Regan Reilly, a private investigator, and two stowaways who are paying a fortune to escape from the law. As weird occurrences continue to happen Alvirah and Regan start putting the pieces together to find out who is sabotaging this holiday cruise.

My Thoughts: As part of my holiday TBR I picked up another Mary Higgins Clark book. This one brings together characters from her books, Alvirah Meehan and Regan Reilly from her daughter, Carol Higgins Clark’s, book series. I have not read either series yet but I met the characters in another holiday mystery last Christmas, Deck the Halls. Even without knowing the backstories I felt that it was easy to enjoy and follow the story.

This book had a cozier vibe to it than others I have read and it had a very complicated and sometimes ridiculous plot but I did have fun reading it, which is all that matters. There was a lot of coincidences that would never happen anywhere else than in fiction but this made it rather funny. There are two criminals hiding on the ship dressed as Santa Claus, a cabin mix-up leading to further complications and several sightings of a “ghost” which are the perfect recipe for a complicated but cozy mystery.

If you want something quick before Christmas than give this or Deck the Halls a chance. Each are short and sweet and will help get you in the holiday mood.

What’s Ashley Reading?: The Winter People

The Winter People by Jennifer McMahon

First line: The first time I saw a sleeper, I was nine years old.

Summary: The town of West Hall, Vermont, has had a history of strange disappearances and deaths. One the first and most confounding is Sara Harrison Shea in 1908. She was found in her backyard shortly after the death of her daughter.

Now in the present day, Ruthie along with her mother and sister live in Sara’s house. Nothing strange has ever happened until one day Ruthie’s mother, Alice disappears without a trace. While Ruthie is searching for clues about where her mother has gone she discovers a copy of Sara’s diary. As she looks into the mystery surrounding Sara she starts to see some parallels with others who have searched for lost love ones. Could they all be connected somehow? What is happening on this farm in small town Vermont?

My Thoughts: I picked this up at a used bookstore with the plan to use it as a vacation read. I know it doesn’t look like something you’d take on a trip to sunny Florida but it was also October. I have read several of McMahon’s books and always really enjoyed them. She does a perfect mix of mystery with a paranormal twist.

I enjoyed the jumping between the historical events of Sara and the present day with Ruthie. Multiple timelines and flashbacks are one of my favorite writing formats. The Sara storyline was really creepy and gave me chills. It was a perfect pick for spooky season but under all the scary bits it brings forth a really difficult question. What would we be willing to do for a little more time with a loved one who has died? It seems so tempting but as we see in this novel it may not be all we expected it to be. This book will make you think deeper thoughts and scare you at the same time. If you want a book for those cold dark nights then this is it!

FYI: Trigger warning : Death of a child, murder, scary scenes.

What’s Ashley Reading?: She Didn’t See It Coming

She Didn’t See It Coming by Shari Lapena

First line: Bryden Frost is running late.

Summary: Bryden Frost has the perfect life. A loving husband, a luxury condo, a beautiful daughter and supportive friends but then one day she doesn’t show up to get her daughter from daycare. When her husband Sam comes home he finds her car, her wallet and no sign of foul play. It appears that she just vanished. As the police get involved pieces of their perfect life begin to fall apart. The police are now in a race against time to find her before it is too late.

My Thoughts: Several years ago I found Shari Lapena and really enjoyed her stories. She wrote good mysteries with lots of twists and turns. They felt fresh and intriguing. With this one I started out really liking the suspense of finding Bryden. I was invested in what happened because so much seemed off about the scenario but as the story kept on I slowly lost interest as I put the story together before the big reveal. I felt it was rather anti-climactic at the end.

In relation to the characters many of the people involved were horrible. As things are revealed there are lots of secrets in their pasts. It could easily have been multiple people for many reasons. Several parts of the plot seemed to be added just to have some filler because they did not seem to be resolved by the end. It was an okay story but definitely not my favorite of Lapena’s work.

FYI: Release date is July 29, 2025.

What’s Ashley Reading?: The Blonde Identity

The Blonde Identity by Ally Carter

First line: Here’s the thing about waking up with no memory in the middle of the night, in the middle of the street, in the middle of Paris: at least you’re waking up in Paris.

Summary: Waking up in the middle of Paris with a splitting headache and no memory of how she got there or who she even is, a young woman is being told to run because people are trying to kill her. As she and the handsome stranger race across Europe to escape the assassins they realize that she is the identical sister of the spy who is the actual target. In hopes of discovering why she is being chased and finding her sister the two pose as newlyweds. But as they learn more about the reason she is being hunted, the woman cannot decide who to trust, the man who rescued her or the sister she cannot remember.

My Thoughts: Having recently read Ally Carter’s newest book, The Most Wonderful Crime of the Year, and really enjoying it I decided to try another of her adult rom-com mysteries. This one I listened to rather than read which I feel like sometimes affects my reception to a story. I did enjoy this and plan to read book two this fall but it didn’t hit with me as much as the other one.

This is a fast paced romantic spy comedy. When I started I got The Spy Who Dumped Me vibes. I liked the banter between the characters but I struggled a little with the instalove. It all happened really quickly. But this could be because the plot had to move fast. It was a quick spy novel where they are running for their lives. There are several twists which may be a little predictable but all in all it was a fun read and kept my attention throughout. I hope to see the characters developed more in upcoming stories.

Last, Current, Next: Jessie’s January Reading Shelf

Last :: “The Society for Soulless Girls” – Laura Steven 

Format :: Audio via Libby 

Genre :: Young Adult, Fantasy, Mystery, LGBTQ 

Fantasy is not typically a genre that I search out when I choose to read it. This dark academia meets supernatural read reminds me of “The Devil makes Three” by Tori Bovalino.  Carvell College of the Arts was once an elite school but is now known for the murders that once occurred there.  “The Society for Soulless Girls” is told in a dual point of view following Lottie and Alice as the unknown hauntings of the school library’s North Tower begins to claim students again. This read is heavy on gothic and supernatural themes, while not something I look for in my young adult reads, I did like this read. 

Current:: “Magnolia Parks” – Jessa Hastings  

Format :: E-read via Libby 

Genre :: Romance, New Adult, Fiction, Contemporary 

The first in the Magnolia Parks series, “Magnolia Parks” follows the main character Magnolia and on again, off again boyfriend BJ through the struggles of love while being the center of British socialite circles. I’m about thirty percent into this and while I can see Magnolia and BJ are incredibly toxic in their relationship and so very predictable, I can’t put the book down. From the first chapter I got “Gossip Girl” by Cecily von Ziegesar vibes, but slightly more mature main characters– heavy on the “slightly” more mature part. I can foresee myself reading the rest of this series just to see what these characters get up to. 

Next :: “Tiny Threads” – Lilliam Rivera 

Format :: Physical 

Genre :: Horror, Thriller, Fiction 

First, the cover was what drew me in. Then, the synopsis got me pulled all the way in. Just shy of 250 pages, “Tiny Threads” must pack a punch with supernatural happenings. I get the vibe that this might be a darker, full of twists and turns version of “The Devil Wears Prada” by Lauren Weisberger. It has been a while since I have read something that made me twist with anticipation to figure it out and I sense that this might be the trick and be more than a dark dive into the fashion industry. 

What’s Ashley Reading?: The Most Wonderful Crime of the Year

The Most Wonderful Crime of the Year by Ally Carter

First line: It wasn’t until the elevator doors were sliding open that Maggie realized she was about to come face-to-face with her three least favorite things in the world: Christmas. A party. And Ethan Freaking Wyatt.

Summary: Maggie accepts a mysterious invitation from her editor to visit her biggest fan in England at Christmastime. Unbeknownst to her, Ethan Wyatt, her arch-nemesis is joining her and her biggest fan is none other than her favorite author, Eleanor Ashley. Upon arrival a snow storm arrives stranding the writers and Eleanor Ashley’s other guests in her isolated mansion. As they settle in for the holiday Maggie believes that Eleanor plans to name a successor, or that is until she disappears from a locked room. Now Maggie and Ethan have to try to find out what happened to Eleanor and avoid whoever seems to be trying to kill them before it’s too late.

My Thoughts: This was the perfect mix of cozy mystery with a holiday romance! I had such a good time reading and trying to figure out the mystery. I loved the chemistry between Maggie and Ethan which was enhanced with the tension and miscommunications.

I’ve seen many people comparing this to Knives Out and I feel that it is a good comparison but I would almost recommend it more on the feel of an Agatha Christie novel. It has all the things I love from her stories with the added enemies to lovers romance trope. Plus, it plays on the real life Agatha Christie disappearance.

One complaint I had was the cover. It is cute (kind of) but it could be much better! There are so many fun covers anymore with the cartoonish characters but this one just wasn’t as good. But don’t judge this book by its cover. It is perfect for Christmas time and it reads very fast! I would highly recommend picking it up for your holiday break.

Last, Current, Next: Jessie’s December Reading Shelf

Last :: “What’s Eating Jackie Oh?” – Patricia Park 

Format :: Audio via Libby 

Genre :: Young Adult, Contemporary, Realistic Fiction 

I needed an audiobook, and this was one of the first ones I came across that was available on Libby. I have not read a food focused book in quite a while, and I liked the premise of a high school student figuring things out in their young life and competing on their favorite food show’s high school edition. A couple of the themes Patricia Park hits on is food insecurity, incarceration of minorities, and the familial struggles faced with immigrant families. My favorite scene of the whole book was the moment Jackie and her mom got on the same page and had a heart-to-heart talk; the audio of this scene made it feel like I was sitting in on a conversation and made the entire plot feel realistic. 

Current:: “Tooth and Claw” – Craig Johnson  

Format :: Physical 

Genre :: Mystery, Western, Fiction 

“Tooth and Claw” is the newest novella in the Walt Longmire series. I was interested in reading this because I have read the first three books in this series, and I’ve always enjoyed the flashbacks of Walt and his good friend Henry Standing Bear. This novella takes place long before the first book begins and follows the duo as they come back from serving in Vietnam and look for jobs. I’m not quite a quarter of the way through this novella, and I love to see the characters of Walt and Henry are true to themselves, but still much younger than they are in the main series. I anticipate this will be a quick and adventurous read. 

Next :: “The Anti-Social Season” – Adele Buck 

Format :: Physical 

Genre :: Romance, Holiday Fiction 

“The Anti-Social Season” is the second book in the First Responders series (which is not a holiday book series, if you were wondering). I’ve been searching for a romantic comedy with a holiday theme and I’m hopeful that this will be a great pick! Thea, firefighter turning social media manager and Simon, a librarian are the main characters of this rom-com. I decided this would be my next read because Thea doesn’t remember Simon at all from high school, but Simon had a crush on her the entire time – this is one of my favorite romance tropes to read. 

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