Writing Challenge Winner: Misty by Bekah Abbot

Bekah Abbot is a fifteen-year old writer who participated and completed the summer 2024 Hero’s Journey Writing Challenge. Her short story, “Misty”, tells the magical tale of sisters, friends, and mysterious creatures.

Read Bekah’s epic short story below:

Original Artwork by Bekah Abbot
Original Artwork by Bekah Abbot

May stood on the deck of the Waterwing with her sister, sad, but not without hope. She wasn’t crying, but she felt as overcast as the sky overhead. Slowly it darkened, then it started raining. Mrs. Daya who was looking after them, came and shoveled them indoors. The rain quickly turned to a raging storm. May tried to calm her sister, but she didn’t feel calm either. The waters tossed and shook the Waterwing as she rolled along on into the mist.  

“Oh, May, why did father send us on this dreadful watercraft?”  

May couldn’t help but smile at her sister’s romantic speech.  

“He already told you, Misty. He didn’t think he should leave us at home alone.”  

Misty saw the sense in that, and decided that it was a good time to curl up gloomily and bemoan her fate. Secretly Misty had always wanted an adventure, but she didn’t think that drowning in the “briny blue” counted. Wave after wave came crashing down on the deck, but nothing but the moaning of the boards reached them, until the boat jerked suddenly. Water started coming in under the door. Misty and May jumped up in terror as the Waterwing was thrown against a big rock. Misty was knocked out of her senses. May tried to wake her from her delirium, but the sea swelled up for another attack. Darkness took over as the Waterwing was swallowed up into the depths.  

“What’s that down in the sand?” Nathaniel wondered as he rode down to the beach. 

As he got closer, he thought he could distinguish a human figure! He dismounted and ran toward it, to find a girl lying in the sand. Nathaniel panicked. What was he supposed to do? Was she even alive? Yes, she was still breathing, though slowly and painfully. He lifted her onto his horse and brought her to his dad’s clinic. His dad was a doctor, he would know what to do.  

“She’ll be fine,” His dad said after careful scrutiny, “but it’s a good thing you found her when you did, she couldn’t have lasted too long it that condition.”  

Nathaniel was relieved.  

“Who’s this?” Nathaniel’s sister Lilly asked, as she came in the clinic door. 

The situation being explained to her, she insisted on bringing her to their house and taking care of her until she woke. Their dad was pleased by this proposal, and helped to get her home.  

“Where am I?” May opened her eyes to find herself in a strange room. The curtains were open, and through the window May could see the sunrise. The bright sunlight poured into the room and lit it up like magic. Someone knocked on the door softly. 

“Hello? Are you awake yet?” it sounded like a girl’s voice. 

“Yes. Please come in!” 

The door opened, and in came a tall girl with thick brown hair. It seemed to May that she brought joy into the room with her. 

“I’m so glad to see that you’re feeling better! Oh, allow me to introduce myself. I’m Lilly Valor.” 

“It’s nice to meet you Lilly, I’m May Hawthorne. Only… where am I?… and why?” 

Lilly laughed   “Oh, fate brought you here. And by fate, of course, I mean my twin brother Nathaniel.” 

May was too confused for words. “Can you remember anything? Nathaniel said you were unconscious on the beach.” 

“Not very well, and what I do remember I can’t be sure is true.” 

“Well tell me what you can remember.” 

“I was on a boat,” May had to think long and hard about the rest, “It hit a big rock pillar, and people were flung overboard. That’s as much as I can remember.” 

“Do you know the name of the boat?” 

“I can’t remember.” 

They went on like this for a while, but May had lost most of her memories. After a while Nathaniel came up to the door. 

“Oh, hi Nathaniel!” Lilly said. “This is May. May, meet my brother Nathaniel.” 

May smiled through her pain. She really liked Lilly, and she thought that she would like Nathaniel too. Nathaniel was tall like his sister, in fact he looked a lot like her, except that his hair was red and his eyes blue.  

“I trust you’re feeling better?” 

“I guess I wouldn’t know. You can’t really tell how you’re feeling when you’re unconscious.” 

Nathaniel smiled. 

“Well, you do look better. You were in bad shape last night, but as long as you don’t give up your spirit, im sure you’ll be just fine!” 

Later that night, Lilly came into May’s room with a necklace that her younger brother Braden had found down on the beach.  

“Is this your locket?” Lilly asked her. “Braden found it not far from where you came ashore.” 

May took the locket and opened it. The picture inside was ruined. The water had made a big mess of it, but she could just make out herself and another younger girl. 

“Misty?” May whispered under her breath. “This is my sister!” 

“You have a sister?” 

“Yes, and she’s probably scared half to death by now! Lilly, I have to find her!” 

“You’re still too weak to go anywhere on your own. I’m coming with you.” 

“No need for you to go anywhere yet.” They turned to find Nathaniel at the door. “I’ll go talk to the police about it.” 

“Thank you, Nathaniel, but I must look for her.” May said. 

When Nathaniel got back May, Lilly, and Braden were ready to go.  

“The Police will search the city, and on the beaches,” Braden reasoned, “so the only other way to go is into the forest! Besides, what better place to seek adventure than Coalrose Forest? You know some say that the forest is home to all sorts of paranormal creatures!”  

“But we’re not looking for ‘adventure’ Braden, we’re looking for May’s sister.” 

“It’s pretty much the same thing though, right?” 

“Makes sense to me,” May said, “who votes we take Coalrose Forest?” 

The company agreed, and on they strode into the dark woodlands beyond. 

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Misty’s heart pounded in her chest as she stumbled through the dense foliage, the towering trees casting long shadows in the fading light. The island was vast and unfamiliar, each rustle of leaves and distant call of birds reminding her just how alone she was. She paused to catch her breath, her eyes scanning the surroundings for any sign of her sister. 

“May!” she called out, her voice trembling with a mix of fear and determination. “May, where are you?” 

The only response was the whisper of the wind through the trees. Misty wiped a tear from her cheek, refusing to let despair take hold. She had to find her sister. She had to be brave. 

The path ahead was treacherous, with roots and rocks threatening to trip her at every step. But Misty pressed on, her mind focused on one thing: finding May. She knew her sister would never give up on her, and she wouldn’t give up either. 

Suddenly, she heard a faint sound, almost like a whisper. She stopped, straining to listen. There it was again, a soft, distant cry. Her heart leapt with hope. 

“May!” she shouted, her voice stronger now. “I’m coming!” 

With renewed energy, Misty followed the sound, her steps quickening despite the obstacles. She wouldn’t stop until she found her sister, no matter what.  

“Misty?” She could hear her sister’s voice calling out to her! 

Misty stumbled along, blind with excitement. Could it really be May? She tripped, but got up and kept going.  

Misty’s relief at hearing her sister’s voice was short-lived. As she hurried through the underbrush, she suddenly found herself face-to-face with a creature out of a nightmare. A giant wolf, its fur as dark as midnight and eyes glowing with an eerie intelligence, stood blocking her path. 

“Well, well, what do we have here?” The wolf’s voice rumbled, deep and resonant, sending shivers down Misty’s spine. 

Misty froze, her heart pounding in her chest. She had heard stories of talking animals, but never had she imagined encountering one, especially not in such a dire situation. She took a step back, but the wolf moved forward, its massive paws silent on the forest floor. 

“Who… who are you?” Misty managed to stammer, her voice barely above a whisper. 

The wolf chuckled. “I am Aldebaran the cruel. And you, little one, seem to be lost.” 

Foxes, wolves, and wild cats emerged from the woods around her, slowly coming toward her. 

Before Misty could react, Aldebaran’s powerful jaws closed gently around her, lifting her off the ground. She wanted to scream, to struggle, but something in the wolf’s eyes told her that resistance was futile.  

“Chain her up with the others.” Were Aldebaran’s commands, as he effortlessly tossed her to a fox. The fox pulled and shoved Misty to his slave line, where he tethered her. Desperation was all that was left for the moment. Misty sank down against a tree and cried.  

“Don’t cry,” The boy in front of her held out his hand to help her up. “You’re Misty, right?” 

“How do you know my name?”  

“You look just like your sister, May. We were all looking for you until I got kidnapped. Of course, everyone else is still looking for you. They’ll find us soon though, I’m sure of it!” 

Aldebaran issued orders to his captains. “Onward! The girl’s sister is too close by for us to stop here.” 

The chain was pulled into action. Misty struggled to keep up. The manacles rubbed against Misty’s wrists, and the pain was too much for her. she started crying again.  

“Don’t give up hope, Misty.” Braden said. “You must have hope, and you must have endurance.” 

“Quiet, you rat!” a cat growled at him. “Do you know what happens to prisoner who misbehave?” 

Misty didn’t want to know. She walked on and tried to ignore the pain. Hope and endurance, she thought. She clung to the hope that May would find her, and endurance would be a lot easier with a friend to endure with her.  

“I know I heard Misty’s voice,” May said, “but why can’t we find her?” 

Nathaniel wasn’t listening. He was still in a state of shock from finding that Braden was missing.  

“I hope Braden and Misty are together somewhere.” Lilly said softly.  

“What was it that Braden said? Home to the paranormal?”  

All of them were freaked out now. Who knows what lives in the forest? What if Braden had been kidnapped? What if both of them had been kidnapped? May’s mind raced as she contemplated the situation, but then what was that??? 

“LOOK!” May screamed. She pointed to a huge dog print in the dirt.  

“There was a big dog here not long ago,” Lilly mused, “And it looks like it was dragging something with it.” 

The three of them looked at each other. None of them said anything, but they were thinking the same thoughts. Braden must have been taken by a massive dog. They followed the tracks, shouting to Misty and Braden, but there wasn’t any answer. The tracks were hard to see in some places, and following them was difficult.  

“haven’t we been here already?” Lilly asked. “it feels like we’ve been going in circles.” 

“No, look!” Nathaniel pointed to the path ahead. “The tracks are changing!” 

The wolf prints were lost beneath those of humans and smaller dogs. May crouched down, examining the faint footprints in the soft earth.  

“They must have gone this way,” she said, her voice filled with determination.  

“We need to hurry,” Nathaniel said, glancing around nervously. “The sun’s setting, and we don’t know what else is out here.” 

Lilly adjusted her backpack and pulled out a small flashlight. “Let’s stick together and keep our eyes open. Misty can’t be far.” 

As they pressed on, the forest seemed to close in around them, the sounds of the night growing louder. Every rustle and snap of a twig made their hearts race, but they didn’t waver. They had to find Misty and Braden. 

Suddenly, Lilly stopped, holding up her hand. “Listen,” she said. The others fell silent, straining to hear. There, faint but unmistakable, was the sound of a distant cry. 

“That’s her!” May exclaimed, her eyes wide with hope. “We have to move faster.” 

With renewed urgency, they quickened their pace, following the sound through the dense underbrush. The trail became more difficult to follow, but May’s determination never wavered.  

After what felt like an eternity, they emerged into a small clearing. There, in the center, stood a massive wolf, its eyes glowing in the dim light.  

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“What did you do with Braden and Misty?” May demanded of Aldebaran.  

“there’s nothing you can do to help them.” He growled. “They aren’t here anymore.” 

“Tell us where you’ve taken them.” Lilly tried. 

“I can’t go any further, so they were passed along to a griffin by the name of Ruby Eyes. She’s as tough as a hydra, and as smart as a sphinx so I wouldn’t even think about following if I were you.” 

“Can’t go any further?” May said under her breath to Lilly and Nathaniel. 

They looked up to see a cloud of smoke swallow the wolf. Their vision went out for a few seconds, and they coughed uncontrollably, but finally the smoke cleared. Aldebaran was gone without a trace. 

“I don’t get it.” May said. “Why did he act like that? Why didn’t he kill us? He even gave us a clue!” 

“I don’t think that he knew he was helping us,” Nathaniel said, “but he helped all the same. We just have to find where he couldn’t go.” 

“But we’re surrounded in trees, he could have gone anywhere!” May said. “There must be something we’re missing.” 

The trio looked around for anything that could help, scouring the clearing and the woods nearby, until Nathaniel found something. 

“Look!” he shouted to May and Lilly.  

“It’s just a log.” Lilly said.  

“No, look,” May said, “see how it has these ancient runes on it? I bet we could fit in it, but the wolf was much too big.” 

“I’m willing to try anything at this point, no matter how foolish it may be.” Nathaniel said. 

Its bark was etched with mysterious symbols, and as they crawled inside, the world around them blurred. Suddenly, they found themselves transformed into tiny mice, whiskers twitching and paws trembling. The new dimension was a place of wonder and danger. May, Lilly and Nathaniel scurried through the grass, their tiny paws sinking into the earth. The hollow log had transported them to a place unlike any they’d ever seen—a world where blades of grass towered like ancient oaks, and petals unfurled into delicate canopies above their heads. 

“We’re mice,” May whispered, her voice a mere squeak. “How is this even possible?” 

Nathaniel’s whiskers twitched as he surveyed their surroundings. “The log,” he said, “it’s a gateway. But why mice?” 

They had no answers, only questions. The forest hummed with secrets—the rustle of leaves, the distant chittering of unseen creatures. Their mission was clear: find Misty and Braden. 

As they ventured deeper, the flora grew stranger. Blades of grass whispered secrets, and dewdrops held reflections of distant constellations. May and Lilly marveled at a spiderweb spun between two towering ferns—it was a silver bridge leading to who knew where. 

“Look!” Nathaniel pointed. “Footprints!” 

Tiny tracks led toward a grove of luminescent mushrooms. May’s heart raced. “They’re here!” she said. “Our siblings!” 

They followed the tracks through the mushrooms, and into a jungle of grass blades. The markings were recent, but they never seemed to end. Just as they thought they would go on forever, the paw prints stopped.  

“What now?” Lilly asked.  

“I’ll tell you what now.” The voice was loud and cold, but they couldn’t see where it came from. “you’re going to have to deal with me now.” An albino ocelot emerged from the grasses, towering over them. She swished her tail mischievously. “I am Falcor Ruby Eyes, feared by all creatures. There is no hope for those who resist me.” 

“Ruby Eyes, as in the terrifying gryphon that the wolf warned us about?” Nathaniel asked. 

“I am a gryphon in your dimension, but we’re in mine now.”  

“But if you’re Ruby Eyes, then you must have Misty and Braden!” Lilly said. 

“My job’s not to learn the prisoners’ names, my job is to get rid of you three.”  

Ruby Eyes thought over her options for how to take care of them.  

“I could eat you, but I wouldn’t want to debase myself by eating a filthy human. . . I could lock you in your own dimension, but where’s the fun in that?” 

May and Lilly were starting to feel sick. Nathaniel held his sister’s paw tightly in his, trying his best to be brave. 

“Maybe I’ll just tie you up and leave you here to starve.” Falcor finally made up her mind.  

She knocked them to the ground with her tail, stunning them. The next thing they knew, they were chained to a big boulder overlooking the sea.  

Misty and Braden meanwhile were headed in a very different direction. They too had gone through the log gate, but Falcor Ruby Eyes faked the paw prints that May, Nathaniel, and Lilly had followed. Ruby Eye’s hoard of ferrets, weasels, and stoats were under strict orders not to let anyone know where they were headed. They rambled through the woods and down into a field.  

“We’re stopping here for the night.” Ruby Eyes announced. “Feed the prisoners and get them some water.” 

The vermin hurried off to do her bidding. Dinner consisted of a few leaves, and a little muddy water. It wasn’t much, but they were glad to get anything at all. Braden and Misty ate their leaves with fortitude, knowing that their siblings were out there looking for them. 

“Braden?” Misty asked quietly, so as not to get in trouble. 

“Yeah?”  

“What if May can’t find us? I know she’ll keep looking for us no matter what, but looking is no help if she doesn’t find us, right?” 

“Don’t worry Misty. She has Nathaniel and Lilly with her. If it makes you feel better, I think I have a good plan to get us out of here.” 

“A plan is still a plan, whether or not it’s a good one.” Misty said. “What are you thinking?” 

“If we can once get out of these manacles, we can go anywhere!” 

“But how can we get out?” 

Braden held up a small dagger he had taken from a stoat. 

“With this!” 

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“What are we going to do?” Lilly moaned. “We’ve been stuck here for hours!” Lilly was starting to cry. 

“Lilly, you’re seventeen. You don’t need to cry.” Nathaniel chided her. 

“You’re not helping, Nathaniel.” May said. “We need to think positively. Without positivity we can’t think straight.” 

“Positivity?” Lilly said. “Let’s see. We’re chained to a rock…” 

“Lilly!” May shouted. 

“I’m sorry, let’s try again. We weren’t eaten by an evil red eyed ocelot-griffin,” 

“That’s better I guess.”  

“STOP! LOOK!” Nathaniel said. “there’s a shrew coming towards us!” 

The little rodent weaved between the surroundings, slowly making it’s way to the rock. It looked like it was limping slightly. When it got to the boulder, it stopped and pulled a few tools out of a bag it carried at its waist. 

“Don’t worry,” He said, “I can get you out of here. Try to hold still.” 

I didn’t take long for the shrew to cut the chains. Lilly stretched her arms and her back, it felt so good to be free again. It was starting to get dark again, and May was tired from, well, everything.  

“Why don’t we go down to my house?” the shrew said. “We can all get some much needed sleep.” 

This sounded like a great idea to May, and Lilly and Nathaniel couldn’t think of anything better. 

“We can’t very well out smart an ocelot-griffin without any sleep.” Lilly said to Nathaniel. 

“Or on an empty stomach.” The shrew said. 

That settled it. The three of them followed the shrew a short way to his house; a small door set in a tree. As they arrived, the shrew’s wife and three daughters came out to meet them. For dinner the shrew’s wife made ‘shrew bread’, which was kind of like dinner rolls, and a soup made from potato, carrot, and mushroom. They only needed a bit of each. They hadn’t slept in a bed of any sort since leaving to find Misty, so that night was the best for all of them. They planned to set out again the next morning, but before they leaft, Mrs. shrew brought them some provisions. 

“I know you three haven’t had much to eat for the last few days,” she said, “so I packed you some food for the road.” 

Mr. shrew came out of the house now. 

“Hold on!” He ran toward them frantically. “I have something here that might help you!” He pulled out a ball of string from his pocket and handed it to Nathaniel. Nathaniel was pretty confused. “it’s a gate.” The shrew said.  

“Like the log we came through to get here?” Lilly asked. The shrew nodded. “But how does it work? It doesn’t have an opening like the log did.”  

“No two gates are the same. With this one you have to loop it around itself to create the opening.” 

Nathaniel accepted the gift gratefully. Now they were off again! They were soon on Ruby’s trail once more, and it was pretty easy going most of the way. After a while, May thought she could see the group of vermin on the horizon. Then she could smell them. As they approached, May noticed that neither Braden, Misty, or Ruby Eyes was there.  

“Let’s stay hidden and watch until they get back.” Lilly said. 

Misty’s tiny heart raced as she and Braden darted through the tangled underbrush, their paws barely making a sound. The moon hung low in the sky, casting eerie shadows on the forest floor. Behind them, the menacing figure of Ruby Eyes, the albino ocelot, loomed like a ghost. 

Ruby Eyes had been relentless in her pursuit. Her crimson eyes glowed with malice, and her sleek white fur seemed to blend seamlessly with the moonlight.  

Misty’s whiskers quivered as she glanced back.  They had managed to slip away once, but Ruby Eyes was relentless. Braden and Misty knew they couldn’t outrun her forever. 

“Keep going,” Braden urged, his voice barely audible. “We can’t let her catch us.” 

Misty nodded, her eyes wide with fear. They zigzagged through the forest, leaping over small sticks, and ducking beneath fallen leaves. The scent of damp earth and pine needles filled the air. But no matter how fast they ran, Ruby Eyes was always close behind. 

Suddenly, Misty stumbled, her tiny paw caught in a tangle of roots. Braden skidded to a halt, his eyes wide with panic. He rushed to Misty’s side, trying to help her up in time. Ruby Eyes emerged from the shadows, her fangs gleaming. 

“You thought you could escape me?” Ruby Eyes hissed, her voice like shards of ice. “Foolish humans.” 

Misty’s heart sank. She had hoped they could find safety, perhaps a hidden burrow where Ruby Eyes couldn’t reach them. But now they were trapped. 

The ferrets, weasels, and stoats closed in. Misty and Braden huddled together, their fur bristling. Ruby Eyes circled them, her tail flicking with anticipation. 

“Any last words?” Ruby Eyes taunted. 

But just as she lunged, a rustling sound echoed through the forest. A massive owl swooped down at Falcor; talons extended. 

“Enough, cat.” The owl’s voice boomed. “You know your orders are to bring them to Lord Rigel alive.” 

Ruby Eyes snarled, but the owl’s gaze held her in check.  

“Noserot, Foulclaw, re-chain the mice.” She snapped at a ferret and a stoat. Then she turned to the owl. “Stay out of this, Feather bag. I can handle a couple of ten-year-olds.” 

“Yes, but can you handle Lord Rigel?” They glared at each other for a second. “I didn’t think so.” 

“Let’s get out of here.” Ruby Eyes commanded indignantly.  

Misty and Braden were dragged all the way back to the slave line. By the time they got there they were both bruised and scratched painfully. The line was immediately pulled into action. 

“Look, they’re back!” Nathaniel said. “Let’s follow behind them.”  

Lilly pulled out the leftover shrew bread and some sunflower seeds to snack on.  

“We’ll need to be careful,” May said, “if we get caught, we’ll be a completely lost cause.” 

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Ruby Eyes and her crew of vermin were headed for her lair, an old (and mostly ruined) castle fortress. On arriving, the ocelot issued orders to the ferrets, stoats, and weasels, sending them here and there, wherever she wanted or needed them. None of them noticed May, Nathaniel, and Lilly watching their every move. 

“We need a good, solid plan before we do anything rash.” Nathaniel whispered.  

“We have got to work together.” May said. “This will be really hard even if we can find a weakness.” 

“But we’re mice,” Nathaniel said, “she’s six times taller than we are! Besides, I don’t think ocelot-griffins have any weaknesses.”  

“Don’t be silly, you guys.” Lilly put in. “the answer’s in her name!” 

“Which one? Falcor? Ruby Eyes?” Nathaniel asked. 

“Ruby Eyes! Don’t you see it?” they didn’t. “Why do they call her that? Because she has red eyes. Why does she have red eyes? Because she’s an albino!” 

“And…” May said. 

“An albino animal’s weakness is her eyes!” 

May and Nathaniel looked at her with admiration.  

“What?” Lilly asked. “Didn’t either of you pay attention in your zoology classes?”  

Braden and Misty were scared. Their chains were tied up to a post in what could hardly be called a castle courtyard. The cold was beginning to be unbearable.  

“Braden?” Misty asked. 

“Yeah?” 

“Do you still think that May and your brother and sister are looking for us?” 

“I don’t think, Misty, I know they are.” 

“But do you think they’ll find us?” 

Braden didn’t know what to say. He really wanted to think they would, but he hadn’t seen any of them in such a long time! Maybe they were completely lost! But he couldn’t say that to Misty.  

“I think… everything is going to be okay.” Braden said. “They won’t give up until they find us, and until then, at least we’re together.” 

Misty smiled. She was very glad to have a friend with her. She didn’t think she could have survived this without Braden.  

It was getting dark again. The days and nights in this dimension were off somehow, with some days longer, some shorter, the sun and moon were always discordant. Most of the vermin went inside the castle to get some sleep, but a few were stationed outside and on the walls. One weasel brought the prisoners some old, smelly blankets. ‘Tomorrow, we leave bright and early’ he had said. They were starting to wonder when this would ever end. Still, no one knew where they were going. Misty and Braden had overheard something about a ‘Lord Rigel’, but who that was was a mystery to them. Soon most of the posted guards were asleep, and Braden and Misty were not far behind.  

May, Lilly, and Nathaniel on the other hand were alert, looking for their chance to get back their siblings. The plan was simple, but it would be difficult. They still had the chain that Falcor used to tie them to the rock. That was the best that they had in the way of weapons. Nathaniel looked in a hole in the outer wall. 

“Ruby Eyes is standing right there!” he whispered, stifling a scream. 

“Looks like this will be harder than we thought.” May said. 

“It can still work.” Lilly said. 

With Falcor guarding Misty and Braden herself, May needed to rethink her plan. With Lilly and Nathaniel helping though, it didn’t take long. 

Misty and Braden were roused for their sleep by some movement in a cluster of ferns nearby. Misty started trembling.  

“Braden, what do you think that is?” 

She was getting really nervous. Then a stone came hurling out of the ferns and struck Ruby Eyes on the shoulder. She turned to see who was there. Lilly emerged from the foliage and rushed at Falcor. May and Nathaniel appeared on either side of the wildcat, Nathaniel with the chain, and May with the flashlight. Lilly sent pebbles and gravel flying in Falcor’s face. Ruby knew that they had found her weakness, but she couldn’t keep the blinding light and the gravel out of her eyes. All of a sudden, she couldn’t see a thing. The sharp pain of a heavy chain hurled at her fore paws. She tried to scream to alert the guards, but she had lost her voice entirely. The big ocelot fell unconscious to the ground. May rushed to her sister and hugged her like a bear. Nathaniel and Lilly cried when they saw Braden again. Nathaniel pulled the post that Misty and Braden were chained to out of the ground, freeing them. They still had to be quiet, so as not to wake the surrounding vermin. May and Lilly tied the string in a loop and held it up for Misty and Braden to go through. They knew better than to question it. Then Nathaniel went through, and finally May and Lilly ducked under, letting the gate close behind them. 

They found themselves back on the beach. May was relieved when she looked down to see actual human hands! Now they were back, they could shout, cry, scream, and talk, and joy filled the air as they celebrated being together again!  

A few days later, Mr. Hawthorne arrived on board a ship called Pearl Queen.  

“I heard that Waterwing was blown off course and landed here, so I came to look for you.” 

Somebody twisted the truth’ May thought, but she was glad to see him again.  

“Mom’s feeling better,” he said, “the doctor says she’ll be able to come home soon.” 

May smiled. Mrs. Hawthorne had been in the hospital far away for a long time. When they had sent for Dad, they were afraid something terrible had happened to her. That was why he sent Misty and May to stay at their aunt’s house (where they never arrived).  

May And Misty were going home the next day, which meant they had to say goodbye to the Valors.  

“You will write to us, won’t you?” Lilly asked May. 

“Of course.” She said. “And you’ll come and visit now and then?” 

“Yes, we’ll try.” Lilly answered. “Oh, I almost forgot!” She gave May the locket she had left in her room. 

May opened it. Lilly had put in a new picture of all of them together. May smiled and put it on. 

“I love it.” She said. 

The End

Writing Challenge Winner: Painting the Stars by K. Ann

K. Ann is an eighteen-year old writer who completed the 2024 Hero’s Journey Writing Challenge in which she wrote a 5,000 word original short story.

Author Bio:

As the daughter of a Marine, K.Ann grew up in a world near yet strange, her experiences influencing her writing. Going from writing almost every genre to narrowing it down to one specific niche, she writes young adult contemporary and historical fantasy with hints of dystopian. When she’s not writing, you can find her touring her favorite fantasy worlds and her local libraries.

You can connect with her by signing up to her email list https://kannwriter.myflodesk.com/z8s2ldayio, as well as on Pinterest as @kannwriter and Havok Publishing, where she works on the operations team.

Read K. Ann’s original short story, Painting the Stars, below!

I tighten my hoodie, hunching against the sheets of rain pounding my back. My glasses fog for a second, and the auto cleaner function kicks in, clearing the fog as if it had never been there. Good thing I saved and splurged on them. I can see again.

I stare at the gray sidewalk. There was a time when there was color, when there was more than only shades of gray. A time before the Rift.

Not that I remember it. There’s been no color for decades.

I have no idea why, honestly. Why anything with color is illegal. But that’s the North American sector for you. There’s rumors that the South American sector has color, but that’s just it: a rumor. With the borders surrounded by a border of solid darkness, there’s no getting in or out.

I don’t meet anyone’s eyes. I’m pretty sure thinking such treacherous thoughts is illegal.

And there are people who can get access to mind reading devices—if they pay enough.

I just need to be inconspicuous.

My sneakers splash in a deep puddle, and I groan. Water seeps through, and my socks squelch as I take another step. They’re sopping. If only I wasn’t a broke runaway orphan, maybe I could afford hovershoes. But no, all I can get are regular, pre-historic sneakers.

My feet squish as I trudge up the stairs to my apartment. I place my thumb on the doorknob, and the door illuminates for the briefest of seconds. It opens, and I am met with a sparse, drab room. This building used to be a really nice hotel—at least, it was before the Rift. Now, it is one of thousands of apartments rented cheaply since it has none of the amenities the

rich folk have. Like a stove that cooks for you and seasons the food exactly to your taste if you code it to your DNA. That sort of thing.

I close the door behind me and hurry into my bedroom. All I want to do is collapse on my little cot in the corner of the room. But first, I hurry to my closet, yanking out a dry hoodie. One of those automatic drying machines sure would be nice on days like today.

But alas.

After I pull on the hoodie, I rifle through the back of my closet, glancing behind me, praying nobody can see through the walls with the latest x-ray vision goggles. Shoving aside piles of laundry that I’m saving my decis to wash, I unearth a lockbox.

Historically speaking, it’s a safe. But today, safes are locked and unlocked using DNA, not spin dials. So I call it a lockbox.

It’s so ancient that, if authorities ever knock on my door, they won’t be able to unlock it. Or so I hope. I have no clue what technology official investigators have, anyway. Or if they’d be able to use a software to discover the code.

I unlock it—459—and pull out my most prized possessions.

A set of paint and a sketchpad.

The curtains are drawn, and my door is bolted. I’m safe. Or as safe as you can be when you participate in illegal activities in the North American sector.

I sit on the linoleum floor and open the sketchbook to a new page. I’m never quite sure what I’m going to paint until I start, especially since I have never seen anything with color. It’s amazing, really, that pure paint survived the Rift untainted and lasted so many decades.

I wet my brush and select a dusty rose color. I’ve never seen the color of a rose, but it is the color I imagine they are—a pink that seems slightly darker than a normal pink, which is several shades lighter than this current paint. I brush it along the whole canvas.

I then choose a deep eggplant color—it’s probably lighter than a normal eggplant, but it’s the closest I have to what I imagine an eggplant looks like—and mix it with the pink in large strokes.

I choose color after color, and it doesn’t take long to realize I’ve painted something I’ve never seen before except in gray shades—and in my dreams.

A breathtaking sunset.

***

I scan the bag of chips someone has set in front of me, not meeting their eyes. “12 hectos.” They place their hand on the sensor, using the chip implanted there to make their payment. I place the chips in a bag and hand it to them, never once looking at them.

I’m a cashier at the Econautic Fuel station (which sells economically friendly fuel made from completely water).

I only made about 15 hectos an hour, but working ten-hour days at least pays for my apartment and a few packets of ramen, even leaving me a little extra.

Extra for the White Market.

Another person waits behind the one I just checked out. I scan his items, and he pays in real coin.

“Here’s your four centis change.” I place the coins in his hands. “Have a nice day.” “Thank you…” his voice trails off, and I glance up, wondering what he’s staring at. He’s reading my name badge. “Marita.”

“It’s just Rita.” My eyes drop once more to scrutinize the dusty counter. Why did I just say that? I never say anything to anyone beside social niceties.

“Rita, you want color, don’t you?” His voice drops to a conspiratorial whisper.

I drop the hectos he gave me, and they clatter against the register. “Are you insane?” I hiss, my eyes frantically looking at the security bots that can transcribe lip movements.

He raises an eyebrow and taps his glasses. My jaw drops.

He has a mind reading device.

And I just met his eyes.

He’s going to turn me in for the reward of 312 kilos.

That’s ten years of wages right there.

I swallow a little and take a step back, bumping into the mini fridge behind me that holds grown-up drinks. It clatters, the display on top falling to the ground with a loud crash. I scramble to pick it up, my heart racing as my fists clench involuntarily. I need to get out of here. I have to run. Hide. Perhaps move to a different region entirely.

I might even have find a smuggler willing to help me illegally leave the North American sector.

“Excuse me, mam…”

I look up, and a woman with a child on her hip holds out a couple bags of chips.

I smooth my face so that there are no worry lines showing and straighten. “I’m sorry for the delay.” I scan her items, she scans her hand over the sensor, and then I’m alone.

The man is no longer here. Only one thing is. A note.

It says, Meet me at the northern corner on the east side of the White Market at midnight.

***

I’m not sure what I’m expecting, exactly. On all accounts, it would probably be safer to book it and leave town. So why am I sticking around?

That note. It’s somewhat ominous, almost as if my doom is impending. And yet, here I wait, at the northern corner on the east side of the White Market, a little before midnight. The White Market opens at 1 am and closes at 3 am. And I’m here, skulking about before it opens.

Second, why is a man who knows how I long for color to be back in the world not turning me in for the reward?

Curse my curious mind.

I hunch over, blowing on my numb fingers to warm them up. I tug my hood up over my head and draw my hands into my sleeves, then stick them in my pockets.

The distant ding of the Mountain Region clock rings through the air. It’s midnight.

I peer into the darkness. Midnight in the North American sector is dreary, with no stars to paint the sky. I glance up at the eternal expanse, wishing I could see the Milky Way, the starry system I only read about in science books when I was in school.

I’m about ready to forget it and leave—both the White Market and the Mountain Region, potentially the North American sector altogether.

But something stops me.

A figure, darker than the rest of the darkness, approaches. I hesitantly take a step back, furtively glancing around me in hopes that someone—anyone—might be there. In hopes that someone will witness what is about to happen.

But nothing. The White Market won’t open for another hour.

The figure is fast approaching, and I can make out his face a little. It’s the man from the station, the one who accused me of wanting color then left a creepy note.

My breath comes so fast and so thick that it fogs my glasses, and the auto-cleaner function has to work double-time to clear it.

“Rita.” The man stops right in front of me. I don’t meet his eyes, but I take in his figure. He’s not super imposing—rather short for a man, about my height. His cheeks are speckled with freckles.

He lowers his hood, and I see his hair is a deep shade—not a gray, but not solid black either. And, not to mention, the fact that he is wearing mind-reading glasses—they sort of look like the mythological Harry Potter glasses.

I force a little smile and take a small step backward. I don’t lower my hood, but I do remove my hands from my pockets so I can fight if need be. “Who are you?”

He is quiet a moment. “My name is of little consequence.”

“I should think not. A name is important. It’s who you are as a person.” Then I clap my hand over my mouth. I can’t believe I just said that, especially not in a time where names are not important and your entire being is shoved into the 28 digit number listed in the chip in your hand. You don’t just go shouting out that names are important when, to the leaders of the North American sector, they’re not.

“Be that as it may.” He clears his throat and glances around again. “Time is short. I need to know where your allegiance lies.”

I stifle a gasp. “W-why, to President Volton, of course.” I salute as I say his name—just like any other citizen would.

He raises an eyebrow. “Really, Rita, I’d think you wouldn’t be such a liar.” “I-I…” I swallow down the lump of fear rising in my throat. “I’m no liar.” “Then why will you not meet my eyes?”

Why indeed?

He sighs. “I’ll be straight with you. You know of the Rift, right?”

Obviously. Everyone knows about how President Volton fifty-eight years ago realized how color influenced people’s minds and made them more susceptible to rebellion. And thus, he went on a journey to discover how to separate color from the world because, without color, there would be no rebellion, and thus less death.

I don’t buy that propaganda, but I give a nod. “We all learned it in grade school.”

He shakes his head. “A bunch of lies. Written by a bunch of liars.” He gives me a wry smile. “Like you.”

I jerk my head and death glare him. “Am not.”

“Are to.” He taps his glasses again, and I grow cold. I did it. Again. Let him read my thoughts.

“What do you want from me?” I whisper.

“That, Rita, is something only you can answer. How badly do you want color into the world?” I dare myself to meet his eyes again, and he reads the answer. “Just as I suspected.” His voice drops to a whisper, and he says, “Let me help you, and together, we will bring color back into the world.”

I give an almost imperceptible nod.

He smiles. “You can call me Orion. Like the hunter who crushes the scorpion.” Oh dear. What have I gotten myself into?

***

The plan is simple: infiltrate Obsidian Holdings, retrieve the famous paintings Starry Night and the Mona Lisa. Each member of the Phoenix Squad has been assigned specific paintings to find there.

The problem with the heist? Oh, the usual—Obsidian Holdings is the largest protection facility for art—mostly, they hold paintings. Other places—like Shadow Holdings or Twilight Holdings—protect the books.

Or, should I say, imprison.

I swallow a gulp as I shudder. Cloaked in darkness, this heist is doomed from the start. Even I know that. It’s not well thought out, for one. Because who plans 27 heists to steal 54 artifacts on the same night?

The dumbo ringleader Scorpius, that’s who. We all have code names and hide our identity, covering anything that might give access to our DNA. So, gloves, hair coverings, face obscurers, the works.

I’m called Sun now. Not Rita anymore. Protection of privacy, or so they say. But I don’t trust Orion to not share that if something better comes his way. I don’t trust him.

Come to think of it, I don’t trust anyone anymore, not since my parents were killed when I was three for secretly writing novels and circulating them to the entire sector.

They were dumbos for being rebels. And here I am, a rebel.

I’m a dumbo.

Sun, do you read? It’s a neurotransmitter installed in my inner ear. It reads my direct thoughts and transmits them back to Orion, who then sends it to Scorpius. And so on and so forth.

I really cannot manage my thoughts right now. Even though anyone could have a mind reading device, and I’m allowing myself to remain completely jumbled inside.

I read. I squint at the window below me—I’m standing on the roof of Obsidian Holdings. Or perhaps I should say I’m laying on the roof of Obsidian Holdings because that is what I’m actually doing. I’m watching the night guards doing their circulations and timing how much time is between them while Scorpius does his hacking thing to take down the cameras inside.

Then begin phase 2.

I roll my eyes and carefully raise the window. No alarms go off, so Scorpius must have pulled through. One advantage to having a master hacker during a heist.

Carefully, carefully I lower myself into the building, changing the settings on my borrowed hovershoes so that I change the surrounding gravity gradually.

One thing for sure about this rebel circle: I get nice gear, better than I ever got as a runaway orphan working at an Econautic Fuel Station.

I peer around, pulling my black hood over my head. I’m wearing a face obscurer, so that if I’m caught nobody will recognize me. Hopefully. Hackers are everywhere, and if someone has a mind reading device, all is lost.

I slowly step down the hall, making my way to one of the galleries.

This is the one. Stop here. The first one is hidden in here.

I approach the door and stop. DNA scanner.

I’ve already removed the sensor. Just go in.

I turn the doorknob and enter the room, glancing around me. I hear steps coming my way, and I quickly shut the door as the guards come into view. Hiding behind a large, ornate vase, I hold my breath as someone marches into the room, does a once-over, and leaves.

Breathing a sigh of relief, I step out of my position. I have seven minutes, more or less, to find the painting Scorpius wants and hide before they’re back.

Describe the painting. I scan the room, searching for something in this room. There is little color here, but there is some. And some means some hope. Hope that color can seep back into this room, this region, this sector. Starting with this painting.

There is a dark black tree-like image that is the focal point, but that is not the main part of the painting. Imagine swirls of glorious colors, with a bright gold sun in the shape of a moon.

A bright gold sun in the shape of a moon? What in the North American sector is that supposed to mean? But I don’t directly think those thoughts because I don’t want Orion to hear them and send them to Scorpius. Will I actually see glorious colors and a bright gold sun?

Perhaps. But perhaps not. Just look for something like what I described. Vague. Obscure observations. Sure I can. My eyes scan the room, searching for something. There are a lot of paintings with hints of color seeping from them, but they’re honestly not very pretty paintings. Probably confiscated from inexperienced painters.

Kinda brilliant, though, hiding a brilliant painting with not-brilliant paintings.

I start peaking behind the stands, looking for something. I’m still not really sure what I’m looking for, though.

And then I see it.

Something so vibrant it hurts my eyes.

I thought my paints were bright, but that is incomparable to this.

The swirls seem to engulf each other, dancing across the canvas over the little town and the tall dark structure.

And the sun! The bright gold sun that looks like a moon doesn’t even begin to describe the majesty. It looks like it is reflected in a water-borne sky with a ripple effect, blending seamlessly into the mystical background.

My hand reaches out to touch it. And that’s when I hear it.

“What are you doing here?”

I whirl around, and there is a guard there, holding a laser taser. “Just taking a little peek. I’ll just be going now.” My hands pick up the painting and hold it behind my back as I slowly inch to the side.

Sun, what is the status report?

Shut up! My mind hisses. I’ve been caught, doofus! I told you this plan was doomed from the start.

Sun, what happened?

I ignore the probing questions and continue my side step. “I just got lost. I’d best be leaving.”

The guard approaches. “You’re not going anywhere.” His eyes try to focus on my face, but he can’t see me well—his pupils go in and out of focus as he tries to see my features.

I grip the painting behind me. I can’t lose this breathtaking piece of art.

The guard shoots the laser, and I dodge it, the painting falling from my hands and skidding across the ground. I leap to my feet and whirl around, the laser shooting toward me again.

I arch my back, and it shoots right past me as I leap through the air toward the guard, knocking straight into him.

He’s out like a lightbulb.

“Oh no, oh no, did I kill him?” I gasp, staring open mouth. But then I realize I can’t just stand here; they’re going to find me. I’ve got to get out of here.

Sun, Sun, do you read?

I ignore the probing and start running, scooping up the painting and turning on my hovershoes as I go. Soon I’m half walking, half flying as I dash toward the open window.

And that’s when a laser hits the obscurer on my face. And a security bot flash blinds me. Oh no oh no oh no. I turn the hovershoes on to the highest setting.

I break through the window, gripping the painting tight, as lasers soar past me into the night sky.

I fly off into the night, just as I see a picture of my face and the words “Wanted: Marita

Davis, 312 kilos” form in the sky.

***

“Sun, what the blazes were you thinking?”

Orion is mad—like, blazing mad. I don’t meet his eyes, since I don’t want him to read my traitorous thoughts to both the North American sector as well as the rebellion, but I can see it in the hardened lines of his jaw.

“What the blazes was I thinking? Fulfilling a dumb mission, what do you expect?” I roll my eyes to the painting in my arms. The colors seem to swirl, filling my vision with beauty. “It was doomed from the start—that many heists in one night is a horrible idea.”

Orion rubs his head. “It was all a farse. The missing paintings were a distraction. You could have left them! And instead you got caught, and we got compromised.”

“Sorry.” I fight surprise but feign sarcasm. “Must’ve missed the memo.”

“Duh. Scorpius was using that opportunity to hack into the government’s security banks to find the secret to how they keep color locked up!”

I glance at the painting in my hands. “They haven’t done a good job of it.”

Orion rubs his temples then sits down on a bench, leaning against the muddy gray building. “There’s a reason for that.”

I plant a hand on my hip, then remember the painting and straighten so as to not soil it. “A reason? How could—” Remembering to play it cool, I rephrase what I was saying. “Why would the government not get rid of color if they could?”

“No, no, no, not that sort of reason.” Orion takes the painting from my hands, and I clench my fists, biting my tongue to keep from yelling at him to give it back. I feel sort of… empty without it. He examines it closely and shakes his head. “The key, my dear Rita, is creativity. And you just broadcasted yourself—and the painting—to the entire nation!”

“Sun.” I reach out and touch the painting, feeling a surge of something run through my fingers. “Sorry. And creativity? What is that?”

“Think of your parents, Rita.” His brows furrow at me, his tone calming as he sees me touching the painting. He pulls it slightly away again, and my body grows cold. “Think of the artist of this painting. Think of yourself. What do you all have in common?”

And that’s when I understand—my parents could not be suppressed. Their life work, their creativity could not be stopped. They had to write, like I had to paint. Just like the artist had topaint this starry night.

Creativity. It’s powerful.

I touch the painting again with a renewed spirit. Light pours out of the painting and into me, streaming through my consciousness and into my very soul. The world seems to explode around me, weaving together in streams of majesty I have never seen before except in weak imitations.

Color.

It’s in me, around me, through me.

It doesn’t matter that I’m a wanted criminal.

What does matter is sharing this beauty with the rest of the sector.

I stare at Orion, and he nods at me. “Rita, you have the gift of creativity—don’t let them take it from you. If those few with creativity are silenced, then there is no hope for restoration of the sector.” He stares into my eyes—his brown eyes with flecks of gold in them. “Will you join me?”

“I’ve already done so,” I say, my eyes taking in his entire personage. His dusty brown hair, his eyes that match, his pale freckled skin, his pinkish lips

I think I want to kiss those lips.

I shake my head to clear that strange urge as Orion continues speaking. “Not that rebellion—the inner rebellion, where we share creativity with the world. I don’t care about hacking and stealing and setting fires. I want to restore the sector. Will you join me, Rita?”

I meet his eyes once more, removing my gaze from his lips. “Yes, Orion, I will help you.” His eyes bore into my own. “It’s not Orion. It’s Dustin.”

I smile. That’s the perfect name for him. “What do we do first, Dustin?”

***

Color seems to spring from my every step. Everywhere, there is overwhelming, swirling colors.

And Dustin can see it, too. I know that now. His desire for a rebellion to overwhelm the world, his mind-reading device so he can find those who are sympathizers to the cause and who might have the gift of creativity inside, his joining with a dumb revolution leader so that he can gain access to art that can cause the spark of creativity in someone to burn to an inferno.

And now, it’s my turn.

I can’t get into my apartment because my DNA will entrap me and garner authorities to the scene, but I don’t need my paint to do this.

All I need is a touch. This one singular painting might not be enough, but it will be the spark. The spark to bring color back.

“Scorpius, we need you to hack into the government broadcasting system.” Dustin stands, leaning against the leader’s desk.

Scorpius rolls his eyes. “Not happening. They’ve blocked my signals.”

I narrow my eyes, crossing my arms and staring him down. “Guess you’re not a master hacker, then.”

“Guess not.”

Blazes. Reverse psychology didn’t work.

“For goodness’ sake. Move over.” I push his arm, and when he doesn’t budge from his chair, I grab his computer mouse and start scrolling. I have no clue how to hack, but maybe this will get him to help us.

I start clicking and clacking away, and Scorpius huffs. “You’re ruining my algorithms.” “Your algorithms, huh?” I highlight a section of code and hover my finger over the ‘delete’ button. “You going to help us or am I going to delete this?”

“Fine, I’ll help you. I can scramble the signal and get you access to the broadcasting system.” He grabs my hand and yanks it aside, and Dustin looks about ready to blow when he sees the man touching me. But Scorpius just grabs the mouse and the pad and starts frantically typing and muttering to himself, strings of code pouring forth from his fingers. “Get ready. What are you broadcasting?”

“This.” Dustin holds up the painting. “Make this the entire sky.” Scorpius’s eyebrows raise. “All over the sector?”

“All over the sector.” I narrow my eyes. “Unless I need to destroy your code?”

“Nope, I got this.” Scorpius takes a little scanner camera thing, and a laser light scans the painting and deposits the image as code into the system.

“We need to have our voices hooked up to the system,” I say. “As soon as you start broadcasting the painting.”

Scorpius’s face goes pale. “They’ll be able to track us if we do that.”

Dustin interjects. “Do it.” The determination in his voice strengthens me. I’m a wanted criminal, but this is worth the risk.

Scorpius mutters something intelligible, then starts typing frantically. He pulls a recorder device from a drawer and connects it to the computer. “Start talking. I’m broadcasting. We have less than ten minutes before they can trace the signal and five minutes for them to get here.”

I grab the device and start talking. “Hello, citizens of the North American Sector. My name is Marita Davis, and I’m a lot like you—someone who has something to hide from the government.”

Dustin takes the mic. “I am Dustin Skies. I seek to remedy the problems that the government has infringed on us. Namely, the dystopian world they have perpetrated in locking up creativity.”

I take over. “Look at the sky. Look at the stars painted in the sky. The colors. The vividness of them. Look what we’re missing. Look at the intricacy of it, and consider this: why has the government locked up color?”

“They’ve traced us,” Scorpius hisses, frantically tapping away as his brow sweats.

“So we don’t get the idea to rebel against them!” Dustin exclaims. He is also sweating. “And has that worked? No! They’ve locked up our paintings, our books, our creativity, and to what end? We’re rebelling anyway!”

Clattering noises ring through the building, and I bite my lip. But I can’t freeze now. My voice gains strength as I continue. “Authorities are on the way here to stop us right now. But our voices will not be silenced. Our words will not be stopped. Look at the stars painted in the sky! Let that creativity abound inside you.”

The door crashes open, and someone screams, “Hands in the air or you’re getting tased!” “Don’t let your voices be silenced!” Dustin cries. “Don’t let your creativity be squelched!”

“I’ve lost the signal!” Scorpius yells.

“Silence!”

The room swarms with officials, and I grab Dustin’s hand. He turns to me and wraps his arms around me, his lips pressing hard against mine for a split second before the officials grab our arms and wrench us apart.

“Don’t tell them anything!” Dustin screams. Someone tases him, and he slumps to the floor, unconscious.

I make myself go limp, but I don’t fight. Neither does Scorpius, other than reaching out his finger to his the “delete all” button on his computer. And he gets tased for that.

I touch my lips, and they take us away.

The End.

What’s Ashley Reading?: Dear Hanna

Dear Hanna by Zoje Stage

First line : Hanna had a feeling about them as soon as she saw them in the waiting room.

Summary : Hanna has spent the last sixteen years trying to deal with her feelings toward her mother through therapy and letter writing to her younger brother. She is now living a rather normal life as a wife and stepmother. That is until her stepdaughter starts to change into something that does not fit into Hanna’s carefully crafted plan. She tries to fight it but finally she decides she has to manipulate the people around her in order to have the life she has so long planned for herself no matter the cost.

My thoughts : I really need to start reading the synopsis of books I request. I saw the author’s name and automatically requested it. I did not realize or pay attention to the fact that this is a sequel to Baby Teeth. That books was crazy and Stage hasn’t written one I’ve liked as well as that one until this.

Revisiting Hanna as an adult is kind of a scary premise. She was a terrifying child. She tried to kill her mother! But I did not realize the link between the books until she mentions an incident from the first book that made it all click. I would have read this sooner had I known. This was just as crazy and twisty as the first one. Hanna has grown up but still has her demons.

FYI : Teenage pregnancy. Abortion. Death. Language. Murder.

Monica’s Musings: Bright Young Women

Bright Young Women by Jessica Knoll

“Right here, right now, I want you to forget two things: he was nothing special, and what happened was not random.”
― Jessica Knoll, Bright Young Women

Summary: January 1978. A serial killer has terrorized women across the Pacific Northwest, but his existence couldn’t be
further from the minds of the vibrant young women at the top sorority on
Florida State University’s campus in Tallahassee. Tonight is a night of
promise, excitement, and desire, but Pamela Schumacher, president of
the sorority, makes the unpopular decision to stay home—a decision that
unwittingly saves her life.

Startled awake at 3 a.m. by a strange sound, she makes the fateful decision to investigate. What she finds behind the door is a scene of implausible violence—two of her sorority sisters dead; two others, maimed. Over the next few days, Pamela is thrust into a terrifying mystery inspired by the crime that’s captivated public interest for more than four decades.

On the other side of the country, Tina Cannon has found peace in Seattle after years of hardship. A chance encounter brings twenty-five-year-old Ruth into her life, a young woman with painful secrets of her own, and the two form an instant connection. When Ruth goes missing from Lake Sammamish State Park in broad daylight, surrounded by thousands of beach-goers on a beautiful summer day, Tina devotes herself to finding out what happened to her. When she hears about the tragedy in Tallahassee, she knows it’s the man the papers refer to as the All-American Sex Killer. Determined to make him answer for what he did to Ruth, she travels to Florida on a collision course with Pamela—and one last impending tragedy.

Bright Young Women is the story about two women from opposite sides of the country who become sisters in their fervent pursuit of the truth. It proposes a new narrative inspired by evidence that’s been glossed over for decades in favor of more salable headlines—that the so-called brilliant and charismatic serial killer from Seattle was far more average than the countless books, movies, and prime time specials have led us to believe, and that it was the women whose lives he cut short who were the exceptional ones.

My Opinion: Bright Young Women is based on the real-life murders by Ted Bundy. This book is really difficult to rate. It started out really good. I appreciate the author’s attempt to focus on the victims rather than “the defendant”. I love the title and the cover is absolutely gorgeous! The title is a play on the words of the Florida judge who called Bundy “a bright young man”, because the focus is on the young women who recognize their worth and intelligence.

Despite the potential this book had, the execution fell completely flat for me. This story is all over the place and not in a good way. I think part of my problem was that I listened to the audio version. It made it that much more difficult to keep track of where in time we were.

My biggest gripe is with the character Ruth. Her sections were off-putting and felt unnecessary to the overall story. I was completely offended when Ruth was outraged by another women grieving a miscarriage in a group grief therapy session, and referred to a late-term miscarriage as losing a “turnip”.

This book would have benefited from including a historical note at the end. I knew a little bit about these murders, but by the end I had to find out which parts of the book were factual and which were not.

For an even more detailed review with pictures from the Ted Bundy case, please see this impressive review by Goodreads user, Barbara! Click Here

What’s Ashley Reading?: Maria

Maria by Michelle Moran

First line: Dear Mr. Hammerstein, It may come as a surprise that I am writing to you, as it appears that the theater industry believes I am dead and can now make up whatever they wish about me.

Summary: In the 1950s, Oscar Hammerstein was asked to write the music for the upcoming Broadway musical, The Sound of Music, based on the life of an Austrian nun named Maria von Trapp. With just a few weeks until the premiere, the office of Rodgers and Hammerstein receive a letter from the musical’s heroine stating her displeasure with the changes they made to her story. In an attempt to head off any bad press the former nun could throw at the new musical, Hammerstein asks his secretary and aspiring writer, Fran, to talk with Maria and try to smooth over any discrepancies. While Fran listens to Maria’s tale she learns that life for the Von Trapps was much more complicated than even the best Broadway musical can portray.

My Thoughts: When I was younger, The Sound of Music was one of my favorite movies. I love Julie Andrews and her rendition of these beautiful songs. While in fifth grade my family took a trip to Germany with a detour to Salzburg, Austria where my family visited several filming/historical locations from the story. It was a highlight for me on that trip, along with visiting the birthplace of Mozart. My love of history started young.

Michelle Moran is a fantastic historical fiction writer. She brings the women she writes about to life and gives a deeper look into their lives. Even though I loved the musical, I never actually read Maria’s autobiography so much of what I “knew” of the Trapp family was from the film and a few facts from movie photo books. I learned a lot about this woman and the family she joined through this story. And I definitely want to read more about the life of this family.

I think it was a great idea to write the story using the upcoming musical as a backdrop rather than a straightforward biographical fiction novel. Many people know the story because of the musical and this will draw them in while also bringing them the true story. For fans of the musical, this is a great companion story.

Monica’s Musings: The Mythical Cookbook

The Mythical Cookbook by Josh Scherer

“Food has never, in the history of the world, been solely about fueling the body. Food is culture, it is tradition, and above all, it is pure freakin’ happiness on a plate.
― Josh Scherer, The Mythical Cookbook

Summary: From the larger-than-life team behind the internet’s most-watched daily show, Good Mythical Morning , and culinary spinoff, Mythical Kitchen , a one-of-a-kind cookbook with 100 recipes for living a Mythical, and delicious, life. When it comes to food—the good, the gooder, and the shockingly not un-good—Mythical Chef Josh, Rhett & Link, and the Mythical Kitcheneers have just about done it all. They’ve taste-tested, mythbusted, and dreamed up the most inventive, delicious, and ridiculous foods imaginable, all for your eyeballs to eat on-screen.

But, since your mouth does a much better job of eating than your eyeballs, this flavor-packed cookbook is bringing the best of the Mythical extended universe into your kitchen. From breakfast to dessert and everything in between, inside these pages you’ll find fan favorites and new inspirations. Filled with one-of-a-kind recipes, profound life advice, candid photos, and at least one weird story about an angry toaster that’s come to life, The Mythical Cookbook will help you cook deliciously, eat happily, and live Mythically. And have no fear while their on-screen creations push food to the limits, the recipes in this book are delicious and doable for real life in real kitchens. Bring extra napkins to the table—you’ll need them.

My Opinion: Recently, I have fallen back into the world of Good Mythical Morning. While I was on maternity leave, you could walk into my home any time of the day to see Rhett and Link on my TV, keeping me company. Over the last three months, I have binged the show to the point where I know the crew by name! Safe to say, I was excited to get my hands on The Mythical Cookbook.

I have found such fun recipes like fruity pebble pancakes, bacon cheeseburger lasagna, Doritos locos calzone, and so many more! Not only does this cookbook have unconventional recipes, it is very aesthetically pleasing! Overall, this is a cookbook that is useful and fun. I might have to buy a copy to keep in my kitchen.

What’s Ashley Reading?: Lies and Weddings

Lies and Weddings by Kevin Kwan

First line: “If I had a flower for every time I thought of you, I could walk in my garden forever.”

Summary: Rufus Gresham is one of the most eligible bachelors and the heir to an earldom. However, the Gresham family has a secret they are hoping is remedied by his marriage to a wealthy young woman. But Rufus does not want to marry for money. He has long harbored feelings for the girl next door, a young doctor, Eden Tong. Then at the wedding of Rufus’s sister he accidentally reveals some rather scandalous information leading to whispers surrounding the young doctor. As the rumors and innuendos gain momentum Eden is ostracized by the matriarch of the family she has known her whole life. Can Rufus defy his mother’s plans and marry the woman he loves?

My Thoughts: I wasn’t sure about reading this book since the first one did not hit as highly as the Crazy Rich Asians trilogy but I am glad I gave it a try. It seems Kwan got back into the flow with this one. It felt much more complete. The story was filled with shocking moments, interesting characters and huge misunderstandings.

As with his other books, Kwan writes of the lavish lifestyles of the rich and this one is no different. There are several jaw dropping weddings and events throughout the story. It is a world that many cannot even imagine but he describes it in a way that makes it more accessible. The characters may feel a little cliché but they are interesting and memorable. Lady Arabella is the scheming mother looking for good matches for her children. Then there is Luis, a child of wealth who is determined to live lavishly without any cares for others. But on the opposite end is Eden, a doctor who spent her life on the periphery of wealth but not being tempted to enter its world. I found myself easily caught up in the plot. If you cannot take a real vacation then maybe a dive into this story will help you to escape the hot Kansas summer.

There is much to enjoy in this book! If you read and loved the Crazy Rich Asians trilogy then I would highly recommend Kwan’s newest book.

Monica’s Musings: Expiration Dates

Expiration Dates by Rebecca Serle

“But being surprised by life isn’t losing, it’s living. It’s messy and uncomfortable and complicated and beautiful. It’s life, all of it. The only way to get it wrong is to refuse to play.”
― Rebecca Serle, Expiration Dates

Summary: Daphne Bell believes the universe has a plan for her. Every time she meets a new man, she receives a slip of paper with his name and a number on it—the exact amount of time they will be together. The papers told her she’d spend three days with Martin in Paris; five weeks with Noah in San Francisco; and three months with Hugo, her ex-boyfriend turned best friend. Daphne has been receiving the numbered papers for over twenty years, always wondering when there might be one without an expiration. Finally, the night of a blind date at her favorite Los Angeles restaurant, there’s only a name: Jake.

But as Jake and Daphne’s story unfolds, Daphne finds herself doubting the paper’s prediction, and wrestling with what it means to be both committed and truthful. Because Daphne knows things Jake doesn’t, information that—if he found out—would break his heart.

My Opinion: Once again, a book by Rebecca Serle does not disappoint! I thought this one would be a light, fluffy romance, but boy, was I wrong! This book was so much more. The concept of receiving notes that show how long a relationship will last is quite intriguing. I managed this one in a single session.

There were a few surprise twists that I did not see coming, but the best part for me was when Daphne stopped letting the pieces of paper dictate her life. She took control and realized you only have one life, so do what you want! I like how Serle writes because it is unique but not too wordy, and her books are always unique.

Check out my reviews of In Five Years and One Italian Summer by Rebecca Serle too!

What’s Ashley Reading?: The Passionate Tudor

The Passionate Tudor by Alison Weir

First line: Mary’s earliest memory was of a glittering ceremony at her father’s court when she must have been very tiny.

Summary: Mary Tudor, the child of Henry VIII and Catherine of Aragon, was raised to believe that one day she would be Queen of England. That is until Henry sets his sights on Anne Boleyn and banishes Mary and her mother from court. Then just a few years later she is welcomed back after the execution of Henry’s second wife. The rest of her father’s reign is filled with uncertainty about her future and the religion she holds so dear. Upon his death and the death of her young brother, Edward VI, she is finally ascends the throne becoming the first queen regnant of England. But as the years of her reign progress her popularity wains as she inflicts harsh punishments and death on those she believes to be heretics, earning the nickname of Bloody Mary.

My Thoughts: Mary I is not a character from Tudor history that I am particularly drawn to. She does have a tragic story filled with triumphs and defeats. As a young woman she is everything that is expected of a princess. She is charismatic, pretty and educated. I liked this Mary. I wanted to cheer for her. But when Henry decides to divorce her mother and leave the Catholic Church, she starts to become the Mary most people know.

It was hard to see her decline throughout the book even though I knew how everything was going to play out. She had a close relationship with her sister until jealousy wormed its way into their lives. Mary’s religious beliefs were a strong driving force behind many of her choices as queen and this created a break between her and the people of England. With each loss in her life she became a harder person to like.

In the author’s notes at the end, Weir explains her reasoning behind her portrayal of England’s first queen regnant. Mary may have done some great things during her time but the bad really do outweigh the good. Only recently has she been able gain some more support from historians. But Weir is not one of them. What do you think? Read this and let us know!

Monica’s Musings: That Sounds Fun

That Sounds Fun by Annie F. Downs

“Travel has always been one of the best parts of my job. But about a year ago, I felt God whisper to me, ‘You’re going to want to be home next fall.’”
― Annie F. Downs, That Sounds Fun: The Joys of Being an Amateur, the Power of Falling in Love, and Why You Need a Hobby

Summary: We know there are certain things we must have to survive–food, shelter, and safety to name a few. But there are also aspects of life that truly allow us to be joyful and fulfilled. For popular podcaster and bestselling author Annie F. Downs, fun is close to the top of that list. Few would argue that having fun doesn’t enrich our lives, but so much gets in the way of prioritizing it. Tough days, busyness, and feelings that are hard to talk about keep us from the fun that’s out there waiting to be found.

With That Sounds Fun, Annie offers an irresistible invitation to understand the meaning of fun, to embrace it and chase it, and to figure out what, exactly, sounds fun to you–then do it! Exploring some research and sharing some thoughts behind why fun matters, she shows you how to find, experience, and multiply your fun. With her signature storytelling style and whimsical vulnerability, Annie is the friend we all need to guide us back to staying true to ourselves and finding the fun we need.

My Opinion: This book, while entertaining, was not at all what I expected. The story is heavily influenced by Christian values and focuses on the author’s life. I thought it would explain more about figuring out a hobby and having fun. I found the author unrelatable, but I still enjoyed hearing her story.

Listeners of her podcast would probably enjoy this very much. I had not listened to her podcast prior. I simply picked it because of the catchy title and pretty cover. I feel like this book falls more in the autobiography category rather than self-help. I am a big fan of a good self-help book that leaves you motivated for life. However, this gave very little advice, and instead was a collection of the author’s personal experiences. Overall, I didn’t take much from reading this book, but it was short and simple enough to finish it.

*I listened to the audiobook on Spotify, and I will say I skipped the interviews at the end of the book.